Poems96/98 (3): "A Closed Sky" by gallimel
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*Sky's closed,
it won't open for my day.
I feel like everyone's just ready
to joke me,
to hurt me,
to laugh at what I am,
to dismiss what I could be.
The flowers never grow here
the birds can't sing my songs...
I am the mud.
Still I don't wanna believe
that there's not a piece of sky
which could open for me,
to let the sun
caress my face,
so pale,
too pale,
while all I'd like
is to be taken,
kissed by the sun,
kissed by sweet lips,
kissed by that care
I'm not gonna give up
to finally meet.
But sky's closed
and I am the mud.
I hear the laughes,
I hear the jokes...
Too many faces, too many forces:
you've dried my hopes
like devil's morphings:
takin one sweet glimpse of eyes
into dreadful offsets,
you're one,
you're hundreds,
you make my sky get doomed,
you make my flowers looming.
I hear the jokes,
they make me cry...
When's gonna happen that I'll get those smiles
to clear my dark sky
that hides sun's rayes?*
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Photoshop. Frome these sources.
Thanx tattoedravengirl for givin me inspiration for the illustration of this poem.
One hour and half work.
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The third piece of my series dedicated at illustrating my old poems written by 1996/1998. Again this is not meant to be a portrait, just a photoshop excercise.
I wanted to give a framed, static expression to an doubting, turning into depression state of mind, still with certain colours to underline a no better defined hope still present in the frame, although very gloomed down by the unacceptance of the positivity of the self ...
I also wanted to compose it in a bit of urban, graffiti-like touches,suggestin a sort of negative psychedelia turning into decorative fixicity.Basically the denying of the youth vitalism, through young codes.
The mood is again low one. Which was common bread by my 19 (but luckely not anymore.. that's why I keep posting this series: look how negative I was, and imagine if I could findhappines back, evryone can :)) ;)
So once more..."Enjoy" :)
Comments (100)
rhiafaery
Beautiful, touching image, and very indicative of how far you have come. I am so glad you are not in that state anymore. You know you give me hope every day that I, too, will pass through this. Stay blessed. ((hugs))
firestorm
i like the graphic feel to this piece, the words are an encouragement that there is hope from the darkness. mostly i like that you're trying these different styles :)
Armorbeast
The text adds new dimensions to this piece Gallimel...must admit that the image had me alarmed that you were in misery till I read the written words you chose to illustrate the image in my minds eye...beautiful combination Galli girl;P
Lombardo
Im so glad that you are okay now. That image does have something from the 90s. Excellent.
madame
Very touching poem and I think that I was like you when I was 19 and even now... but only somtimes :) And a very creative artwork to illustrate your words. Simply fantastic, Meli !
Zarabanda
great color scheme, very modern looking.
Tammy
It is a beautiful poem and you illustrated the thoughts and feel of it very well in your image.
StudioTjeerd
Brilliant work again, Meli! I love the total concept of this composition! Great job!
LFNForever
Excellent stuff!! :)
HobbyHopper
Great idea and a great artwork.
undisclosed-designer
it's different, but very nice creative collage of words mixed with pics smile
tatooedravengirl
Omg Meli this is wonderful and what a great poem to put my pic with..thank you so much for making my image go with this poem it's wondeful and I love it hug's...your a wonderful person and I glad you are full of life amnd love..love and respect..Julia
artingrid
Here are a thousand smiles for you, dar Meli!!!!! What an emotional, impressing work. Glad you are a Webist! Stay tuned. Sorry for being a bit non-communicative during last weeks.
Synapse
The poem conveys such heartache while she looks bleak and lost among the chaos of emotions around her, as if she's too numb to outwardly reflect her pain. Julia was a great model for you here.
See you tomorrow night luv :-)
pjaj
Very fantastic artwork Meli. Excellent!!
DrmzRmyne
I don't know if I could put it better than what everyone else has said. The poem is deeply moving, the words go right through the soul and your embarkment is a journey that will never end. You're an amazing person and artist. Excellent!
Rykk
Wonderful montage, Meli and such evocative prose! Ahh, the tempest that is youth when EVERY emotion was SO intense. Glad you are happier, now! :>)
nagishiva
Ahh..I am late. ;) It's a wonderful piece as always. Doesn't make itself justice on my screen though..it looked way better in uni. :) But I like it alot..especially the feelings it subjects to you and through the poem. Beautiful in it's darkness.
Henrik_K
very touching words, I so love "the birds can't sing my songs..." , and nicely visualized
ShadowWind
Well done, and really follows the words meanings...
Tamela.J.
Excellent work!!
ralphwarnick
Wonderful image and arrangement of parts. I hope smiles always come your way.
calum5
As ever you hit everything out to perfection as real artist and writter do!Your artistic abilty is amazing:-)byeeeeeeeee calum
cbender
oh - i'm quite late i know... :) well seems to be that i could stay the last one on here... :)
i love your work and your words... :) a different style... but good... definitely :)
classyladytwo
vote excellent poster work here Meli then again to me you could never do anything art work I wouldn't like love it all.
beyondthezero
I think the poster/montage is great, and well illuminates the words.
ratto
So many simple shapes and lines in this image. Simple need, simple lines. Beautiful and sad.
Akinom
A great concept and perfectly executed! Brilliant work, sweety!
vonfranck
A wonderful Work . . . ! A deeply lyrical set of Verses . . . ! Marvelous . . . ! "Vote . . . !"
Anjour
Excellent idea and great artwork!!! :o)