C.H.I.C.K.S. (Page 3) by Calseeor
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C.H.I.C.K.S. is a new comic series that I am going to try my hand at. I am using this as a lesson to get better with my compositioning and postwork skills (of which I have basically none).
My ultimate goal with this project is to get good enough to publish something through (http://www.comixpress.com/).
After the first couple of pages is posted, there will be an introduction page.
I am a big fan of B-moives, and hope to recreate, as best as I can, the fun and goofyness associated with them (not to mention the babes!)
The office this page is rendered in, is a great freebie called "x2000's Penthouse" made by x2000, available here in free stuff. Thanks x2000!
Thank you for looking,
Comments and tips always appreciated,
--Eryk
Comments (7)
sanosoke
Don't you need to have some kind of premise? Even B-Movies make an effort to let the watcher not be totally confused. I think that's the first thing to get, postwork. . .later
Calseeor
I do have a premise. I don't understand what you are getting at. Currently, if you read page 1 and 2, you SHOULD be questioning what is happening, but it should be clear there is a fight. Maybe you missed page 1 and 2?
runeseeker
Nice work Eryk. I love the refelctions in the eyes on the 3rd panel, nice detail. The new girl makes me think of a female Prof X from the X-Men. Maybe she's Prof. Double D? ;-)
Hawke
Looks like your trying a few different render styles here. I like the one at the bottom with the toon style reflection on the floor - that must have taken ages.
RaysOfLight
oooooooo i like this one. the action really came through to me. i can picture the catwoman look-alike springing up and wacking the big-reflective-boobed lady on the head or something hehe by the way, have you messed around at all with cel shading, or is that something poser doesn't mess with? though i'm pretty sure i've run into it before
Goddess
excellent job hun, this is great, wonderful reflections also, you are mastering at this! ~Mel
killerpumpkins
I like the use of texture and the reflection in this. Great perpective too! Maybe a different color on the "eyes" frame border. Xlent