Flotation by nikkyc

Vue • Landscape • posted on Oct 05, 2003

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this was produced in Vue please comment and tell me where i have gone wrong pls also rank it as i am still quite new at modelling and i know i need a lot of work but am i even close? thanks nikky

Comments (4)

richardnovak77

9:27PM | Sun, 05 October 2003

the GOOD: the composition is probably the part i like the most. the BAD: the colors are a little dull and washed, and there doesn't seem to be enough... life? to the image. the UGLY: tree clones :) good work. keep practicing!

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wabe

1:39AM | Mon, 06 October 2003

Thje boat is excellent. In position and texturing. The light need a lot more improvement. At the moment the foreground (key element) seems to be darker than the background. Try to focus the light more to the foreground and it will be much more interesting. And add more vegetation. Nature normally has more to offer than two trees. Bushes, gras, ... If you create every tree separately (by simply clicking onto the icon) you don't have to copy them. And it will look more realistic too. Iff you copy, turn and squeeze the trees so that they look more differently. But please, go on!

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