Wisdom by ObsidianLogic
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Submitted on 2004-02-25 22:40:22
Wisdom
Once a Great Wizard,
Put forth such a test.
To look for the heart,
In the finding a Quest.
To take up the challenge,
Were Brothers three.
Alchemist, Warrior,
And Wizard to be.
Behind them unknown,
Was the last of their score.
The smallest but,
He would get there before.
Saving them all,
From a terrible fate.
By taming the dragon,
That guarded the gate.
Shocked they were,
Their hearts stopped with fear.
At finding their baby brother here.
He told them to stop,
It was a silly Quest.
To go out to look,
For what resides in your chest!
D.M.Purnell Feb 24,2004
(( I created this for the last contest jugged and announced today March,3 my 4 sons were my muses so this is for them ))
Comments (8)
Bothellite
Delightful... Your boys will be a constant source of inspiration and perspiration...
DennisReed
A truly enjoyable rhyme! Baby brothers can and often lead the way! That's because they get to share in the experiences of the older ones without always having to undergo the test! Hugs for you and your muses! Bravo!
antje
I love that poem! You always have such a wonderful imagination and such a fantastic way with words. Excellent!!!!! :o)
Blush
Wish my son could produce a muse like this Hon this is beautiful I would read more but I have this virus going around and got to lay down When I feel better will catch up Thanks for your kind words on my poetry Love and hugs Susan~
romanceworks
Totally enchanting poem. :o) CC
roadrunner69
As the 'oldest' of 'nine' I sure do identify. .... I think maybe us 'oldest' are clearing the woods of trees, creating a path, so that our 'youngest' don't have to do so? .... I think we get caught up in all of 'this' and 'forget' what we need and are at times? .... excellently written .... thumbs up!
calum5
What a great poem,the story inside also flowed with your abilty to captivate straight away!Excellent as all your works are:-)Byeeeeeee calum
Jalen
id just like to add that being single mom of two teen young men that the bond between brothers are very strong and carry them thru it all..i'm proud of them both..seeing as they both came to death so many times between the ages of 2-11...excellent Davina im sure they will continue to be ur muses forever..hugsJalen