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The Dark Hours

Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Jan 27, 2005
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The Dark Hours by David Levins [midrael] The clock chimes as I open my eyes and see A sea of darkness in which I'm adrift. I can see no light to which I can flee. I can only feel the darkness beneath me shift. The pain comes in waves, stabbing at my heart, Forcing me into the rolling tides of black, Leaving me helpless as my soul is ripped apart, And my strength and will slowly begin to crack. I still can breathe, yet I gasp for breath As my mind fights against terrors unseen, Becoming frantic as I feel the icy chill of death And cursing my senses that are suddenly so keen. Is this reality or something less cruel? Am I nothing but a pawn of fate? Destined to meet pain in an endless duel, Doomed never to leave this nightmarish state. Again I open my eyes, and this time As reality greets me, I find upon me no mark. Yet the agony will not disappear but only climb, And I find myself longing again for the dark.

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KimberlyC

11:00PM | Thu, 27 January 2005

This is awesome!.. You truly are one of the best poets i've read... Can't wait to see more. :)

atom80

11:13PM | Thu, 27 January 2005

WOW! You have a very powerful grasp of poetic imagery. Each verse builds well upon the next weaving a short, but thrilling tale. Bravo!

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dido6

11:52PM | Thu, 27 January 2005

Very vivid my friend!! wonderful as always!!

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Shadowmonkey

5:39AM | Fri, 28 January 2005

A disturbed dream has a devastating effect upon our physic

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TallPockets

2:29PM | Fri, 28 January 2005

Superb written piece.

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alsafysh

9:20AM | Tue, 01 February 2005

i should have known you were insane long ago, but this proves it.

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FireTemptress

12:38AM | Thu, 28 April 2005

Stunned..... Again, feels like something not quite said, but hinted at. You capture the feeling of desperation and sadness, fear of never reaching what you want. Amazing...


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