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Into The Sun's Shadow - Pt. 2

Writers Story/Sequential posted on Nov 09, 2023
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My deepest appreciation for coming by. I welcome any comment, critique, suggestion or advise that you might wish to leave. Take care. Hilda P.S. Probably best if viewed in full size to be easier to read the narrative.

Comments (9)


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eekdog

10:59AM | Thu, 09 November 2023

each panel is outstanding.

Hilda_Starseer

11:01AM | Thu, 09 November 2023

Definitely appreciated.

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ZjaelingNytesong

11:04AM | Thu, 09 November 2023

Very well composed and written.

Hilda_Starseer

5:21PM | Thu, 09 November 2023

Thank you!

PhthaloBlue

12:55PM | Thu, 09 November 2023

Beautifully done!

Hilda_Starseer

5:22PM | Thu, 09 November 2023

Thank you for your gracious comment.

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NoRhymeOrReasonToIt

6:11PM | Thu, 09 November 2023

Great art and story. The way you have your panels laid out seems unique (at least to me) I really like it. Having to often scroll up and down from description to image can become a little tedious on marathon reads. Makes it a lot easier and more of a steady flow in the story's progression the way you're doing it, IMHO.

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Hilda_Starseer

6:21PM | Thu, 09 November 2023

I really appreciate your input on my art, writing and layout. It's a little more work putting out posts in this fashion, but I think it will be well worth the extra time and effort.

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RedPhantom

5:12PM | Sat, 11 November 2023

Nice Job. I can relate to Kara's hesitance. I'd be the same way.

Hilda_Starseer

3:56PM | Sun, 12 November 2023

Yeah, it all sounds great... Savior of the Universe ( FLASH!... ahhh, ahhh), until it gets serious and they try to kill you.

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RodS

9:42PM | Tue, 14 November 2023

That would definitely be a tad overwhelming.... "You want me to do WHAT??"

Your layout is great with the panels and dialogue below the images. With an epic like this, speech bubbles would just not work - or they'd be clumsy at best. Your artwork is magnificent, Hilda! Keep them coming! (I should talk... LOL)

Hilda_Starseer

8:18AM | Wed, 15 November 2023

At first I had thought about bubbles, then realized that too often they have a tendency to obscure what may be vital areas of the image.

So, I went with the format I'm presently using, seems cleaner and more efficient.

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UteBigSmile

3:55AM | Wed, 17 January 2024

This really is beautiful looking work and story!

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Hilda_Starseer

5:17AM | Wed, 17 January 2024

Your praise means a lot to me, my deepest thanks.


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