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The Lost Sherata

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Chapter 9

Jack’s finger was still depressed on the trigger of the heavy machinegun as he stepped backwards through the Event Horizon of the Gate and into real space. He continued to hold the trigger, unleashing a hail of bullets into the wormhole to ensure nothing was going to follow him through. He let go of the trigger as the Event Horizon collapsed. His eyes flicked down to the ground. He was standing on the cobblestone of a courtyard with manicured cherry blossom trees spaced around the border. “Jack, turn around, slowly,” said Chief in a low and deliberately paced tone. Jack turned slowly, unsure what he would fine. Chief and Commander Talbot were standing, but the Marines and Aeden soldiers were all on one knee in a semi-circle with their rifles pointed outward. Several hundred of the fanged Sherata tigers stood silently facing the small group of soldiers. One tiger stood in front of the formation, watching them with eager eyes. Jack slowly placed his weapon on the ground. “Everyone, lower your rifles.” “We can open the Gate and try to make it through to Planet 2,” replied Chief. “We’d never make it, those things are fast,” said Jack, studying the tigers. The tigers weren’t arranged in a battle formation like he’d seen in the past from Sherata tigers, but more like they had assembled to watch a parade. “Commander Talbot, something is different about these Sherata.” Commander Talbot eyes scanned the formation of tigers. “Yes, they’re smaller than the one’s we’re used to, and most of them are female, but even the males I see are smaller. And look at their paws, something is different, but I can’t see what it is from here.” “They have more variety in their fur, and I see cubs,” said Jack. “I’ve never seen a Sherata cub before.” “We keep the cubs in pens until they’re trained,” said Talbot. Jack studied the Sherata for another minute, they were still deadly looking, but something was missing in the way they held themselves, he didn’t feel the same fear and dread as the Sherata that he’d seen before. “Alright, everyone stay calm, and get your fingers off the trigger, this isn’t a battle we could win. I’m going to go talk with that one in front.” Jack walked between the Marines that formed the defense perimeter and out into the open area of the courtyard. His eyes flicked to buildings beyond the courtyard walls. Who had built those, and to what purpose? Were the tiger’s handlers living here, and if so, why weren’t they here? Jack stopped ten feet from the Sherata tiger standing in front of the formation. The creature’s fur was clean and brushed, and its claws meticulously groomed. There was no sign of neglect, and the tiger was obviously healthy and well fed. Jack realized what had set them apart from the Sherata he had encountered before, it wasn’t their size, but that they had no whip scars from their handlers. Jack was about to speak when the tiger knelt on its front leg and bowed its head. “Greetings, Creator. I am Azeil. We have kept the Law and never faltered in our duty. The Sherata tiger spoke in a dialect of Aeden so old that Aya had to load it into Jack’s memory for him to understand what the tiger was saying. “Is our shame forgiven?” The tiger stood. “We kept your commands, come, look, see all that we have built, yes?” Azeil turned and the other tigers moved aside to form a path to the gates of the courtyard. Aya, Jack’s A.I., spoke in his head. “Jack, I have scanned this tiger’s physiology. It is nearly identical to an Aeden Sherata, but the front paws have been modified. The joint of the fifth toe on the front paw has two phalanges moved to a forward position, similar to a human thumb.” Azeil had already begun walking through the path the Sherata had created. She stopped and turned around when she realized Jack wasn’t following. “Is something wrong, Creator? Have I offended? I will show you, we have kept the Law.” Jack needed a moment to think. “I would like some water.” The tiger’s eyes widened and its expression seemed to Jack as if the tiger thought it had just committed the gravest of offenses. “Mistake, unforgivable, I should have had water here, I have failed,” wailed the tiger in a pathetic cry of sudden anguish. The tiger threw itself on the ground and rolled in the dust as it lamented its horrible mistake of not having water available. “Stop,” shouted Jack, confused by this display. “I am not offended, and…” Jack thought quickly how he could undo what the tiger thought was an unforgivable and careless omission of its duties. “…the water is not for me, but…” Jack’s eyes fell on the Sherata cubs. “…for the cubs, they look parched having waited in this heat for us to arrive.” The tiger only increased its lamenting and rolling. “We have failed, we cannot even care for our cubs. All is lost.” Jack’s head whipped back and forth as every tiger except the cubs joined their leader on the ground rolling in the dust and crying out as if they were in terrible pain. Jack backed up to the perimeter of the Marines and glanced at Chief. “I didn’t do anything.” “Excuse me,” said a small voice. “You’re not really one of the Creators, are you?” Jack turned his attention to an adolescent cub not much smaller than an adult. “What…??” “You’re not a Creator,” repeated the cub. “I can tell.” The cub scrunched her face up into the tiger equivalent of a side-grin. “It didn’t make sense that the Creator’s would still be using such a primitive device to open wormholes. Surely they would have invented the World-Bridge by now.” “Wha…?? World-Bridge?? Who are you?” asked Jack. The cub cocked its head to the side. “Maybe you already have a World-Bridge, but call it something different. I can show you,” offered the Cub. Jack held both his hands out in front of him. “Slow down. What’s going on with them?” Jack gestured at the lamenting tigers. The sound of their wailing made it difficult to concentrate. The tiger’s face fell into an expression of sadness. “It’s the sickness, it comes after you turn four or five and lasts until you’re eight or nine, then we die when we’re ten. None of the elders live in the city, they all move to the mountains after the sickness passes. I don’t blame them, I’ll run away too after it’s over. I’m four, the sickness is coming for me soon.” “What sickness?” asked Jack, starting to get frustrated? The cub looked up at Jack with the saddest eyes he’d ever seen. “The Creator’s caused the sickness when they re-sequenced the chromosomal double helix DNA strands. It gave us hyper-intelligence by increasing hormonal development, but the side effect was a hyper-emotional state. Just about anything can kick off an episode. We take care of them, but… I’m so tired.” “Jack, a word over here, please.” Commander Talbot motioned for Jack. “Do you know anything about all this?” asked Jack, walking back to the Commander. “My guess is the dinosaurs were the researcher’s first experiment, but they were too violent and uncontrollable to be used, so they tried next on mammals, but there was a problem,” explained Talbot. “Have you ever noticed that the Sherata have no emotions, they are pure killing machines that blindly obey orders?” “Yeah, I kind of noticed that, first hand,” said Jack. “These Sherata must have been their first attempt. The result was a hyper-intelligent, but emotionally damaged tiger, and that wasn’t the super soldier they needed.” Jack nodded. “I get it, these Sherata are another failed experiment. The researchers removed all emotion from their next batch and finally had their army of super soldiers, but why didn’t the researchers destroy the failed experimental subjects?” Commander Talbot turned his head towards the lamenting tigers. “They were probably going to, eventually, but they blew themselves up with the anti-matter device. And the Emperor didn’t care, or didn’t know where the secret research base was. The needed Sherata had been sent to him already, and these failed experiments were left to fend for themselves.” “So, what’s on Planet 2?” asked Jack. “My guess would be nothing. Planet 2 is where our Sherata were created. It will be an empty world.” “Then we still have two chances left to find the anti-matter device.” “Hello, I can hear you.” The cub waved a paw in the air. “Is that why you’re here, you’re looking for an anti-matter device? We found one a long time ago.” Jack and Commander Talbot turned to stare at the cub. “Do you still have it?” asked Jack. The cub shook its head. “No, it was way too dangerous to keep on our planet. So, we built a rocket and launched it towards the sun, but it was our first rocket ever and it got caught in the gravity-well and crashed on the planet that orbits the second sun. They say the explosion was seen even though it was daytime.” Jack smacked his forehead. “Oh for the love of the Sky Gods, you’ve got to be kidding.” Commander Talbot shook his head. “They blew up the Research Base?” Jack started laughing and bent over with his hands on his knees. “I do not see what is so amusing?” asked Commander Talbot. Jack held a hand up and gasped for air. “Imagine what they were thinking when their own emotionally neurotic experiment fired an inter-planetary anti-matter missile at them.” “We did what?” asked the cub, craning her neck to see what the men were doing. Commander Talbot frowned at Jack’s youthful and inappropriate behavior. “Jack, compose yourself, you are not a teenager to giggle at the misfortune of others. You are a Captain destined to Command the greatest ship ever built, act like it, this is a very serious situation. The Aeden will come because the Eroden are coming, but when they find these Sherata, they will destroy them. You accused me of being sent to determine if you are a coward, but your courage is not what is in question, it is the nature of your courage that your grandfather wants to know. In his own words he told me, ‘We do not need another Butcher of Aeden, that time is done, now we need a leader that has the courage to save lives.” Jack straightened and his expression hardened. “Yes, Sir, you’re right, I apologize, I don’t know what came over me, it won’t happen again.” Jack turned to the cub. “What is your name?” “Mara.” “Mara, you said you invented your own Gate technology?” The cub was sniffing at one of the Marine’s machineguns and replied distractedly. “Yes, the World-Bridge.” Jack motioned for the Marine to remain calm. “Why haven’t you left this world?” The cub, now bored with the machine gun, started sniffing the Marine’s helmet. “Where would we go, nobody wants us, the Creators rejected us.” “I know how that feels, the Creators rejected me also, and if not for the protection of the Ruk, I would have been torn apart by the Sherata that the Creators chose.” The cub finished her inspection of the Marine by licking his face, then looked up at Jack with a brow furrowed in confusion. “Wait... what... the Sherata hunted you, but… we don’t do that?” Jack reached a hand out and stroked the cub’s face. “The Chosen Ones were chosen because they are willing killers created to do nothing but kill.” The cub shuddered. “I don’t want to hurt anyone.” Jack knelt and took the cub’s head in his hands. “I know, I can see that you are not that other kind of Sherata, you are intelligent, and kind, and have cared for the sick in your society for countless generations. You are the Sherata I would choose. I want you and all the Sherata here to come with me, and together we can build a new life for you, and perhaps we can find a way to undo the sickness.” “You want me?” asked the little tiger in a hopeful but uncertain tone. Jack lowered his voice to a gentle whisper. “Yes, Mara, I want you and all the Sherata here, there are two armies coming, and they will destroy this place.” “Why?” Jack paused. How could he explain such complex things as conquest, greed, and hatred to such an innocent creature? Jack shook his head. “I don’t know, Mara, I really don’t know.”

Comments (13)


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VDH

4:55PM | Wed, 11 August 2021

Awesome creation !!

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eekdog

6:45PM | Wed, 11 August 2021

Nice sabre tooth cat. Awesome all around.

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bakapo

8:02PM | Wed, 11 August 2021

He's going to save the cats. Smart cats with thumbs...I like that. A cool and unique chapter, nice work.

Wolfenshire

10:20PM | Wed, 11 August 2021

Not just smart cats with thumbs, but smart alien prehistoric space cats with thumbs.

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mifdesign

8:04PM | Wed, 11 August 2021

Impressive Sci-Fi story, great Ice-age flavours, brilliant render.

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donnena

8:40PM | Wed, 11 August 2021

my eyes leak

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Radar_rad-dude

9:49PM | Wed, 11 August 2021

A most fascinating and wonderful chapter! Gotta love the little kitties!!!!!

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STEVIEUKWONDER

4:22AM | Thu, 12 August 2021

Beautiful artwork!

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uncollared

6:53AM | Thu, 12 August 2021

Oh Good kitty

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jendellas

1:27PM | Thu, 12 August 2021

That image is amazing, now to read the chapter, it will be good.

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KarmaSong

1:29PM | Thu, 12 August 2021

A fascinating reading and inspiration, beautifully illustrated! Why not try your luck , publishing all these fabulous writings at one go, digitally or in paper ?

Wolfenshire

11:26PM | Thu, 12 August 2021

There's two published on Amazon, but books don't sell well anymore.

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RodS

8:47PM | Thu, 12 August 2021

Now, I just want to go out and hug a tiger.... It's your fault, Wolf... 😆

This is such a wonderful chapter - full of delightful kindness and innocence. Top marks as always! I love the art, too!

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anahata.c

4:03AM | Fri, 13 August 2021

I decided, rather than respond to your comment (to my dedi to you) in my gallery (thank you so much), I'll add it to my comment to this chapter, as it all seems to fit in. And I'll mention your previous reply too...(I may have to pay rent for this comment, I hope it doesn't take up too much space!)

on this chapter: I've been struck, for some time, how you go so intensely into one chapter, and then, with the next, you are in a completely different place (physically or story-wise). I assume it takes mindfulness to keep all the chapter-strands together over time. It's very impressive, in any case. I didn't expect this chapter at all!

This chapter has a very poignant feel to it; the revelations of this 'earlier version' of the sherata (the first experimental version) reveal real heart and tenderness in the animals and in jack...And, when Jack, a ways down, speaks of wanting these sherata as they are, and that they can do acts of kindness together and cure the sickness: This is very touching. Jack is showing his heart as a leader and future commander. I really like these tigers. Now I know you mentioned the sherata in your last book, but (forgive) I don't remember all you said about them, because I was away from here since then. But I can say I am not lost one bit because I don't remember: They're so well conceived here, and so emotionally compelling, they stand on their own. I get that Jack wants them to lose the self-flagellating act, but the tenderness of the cub makes up for that, for me. A wonderful interaction, full of human tenderness and vulnerability; esp with lines like), "How could he explain such complex things as conquest, greed, and hatred to such an innocent creature? Jack shook his head. “I don’t know, Mara, I really don’t know.” Though I've seen Jack's heart many times since discovering your writing, I am still always surprised at him; and this ending was a total surprise. Its poignance stops our consciousness of the war for a moment, like a cease fire in the universe. Jack and Mara have a bond; and for a moment, it puts all the conflict to the side...the scene glows.

I love the image of bullets in the wormhole, as a preventive. I also like the idea of "alien prehistoric space cats with thumbs"---(you wrote that to Barb, above): Lol, that's a mouthful! Thumbs imply, to me, an evolutionary step 'up', because the opposing thumb is considered so key to the rise of the human race. I can't help think of that, even though you may have had something completely different in mind. These tigers seem so sophisticated in their vulnerability and emotional subtleties; and certainly Mara does.

(Do you know some of the etymologies of "Mara"? You probably do, but 2 are worth mentioning: The hebrew means "bitter" ((miriam comes from its root)), whereas the greek means "beauty" or "forever beautiful"...and so Mara can be beautiful but with tears...it just fits Mara (at least so far), so I couldn't help think of it...)

I also love the image of Aya sending messages to Jack's head: Lots of invisible acts unfold in your tales. Great image...And the image of the marines in the defensive circle. And then the start of the sherata forgiveness-ceremony when they find out Jack didn't get his water. (Like, "it's just WATER, guys---really!") And their "all is lost" (they can't even care for their cubs): There's poignance and humor in this.

You work your way to telling us the origin of these sherata, to "another failed experiment"...and then we find out about the anti matter device which explodes on a planet and is so bright it can even be seen in daylight---it's like a nuclear explosion! love the image and the way you build to the history of these sherata. (Another fascinating name, btw.) Also: a real 'wolf' detail of the cub sniffing the marine's paraphernalia, while answering questions. Love these details. Then the beautiful speech of Jack to Mara (wanting to bring good to others, cure the sickness, etc) and the end, which is very touching.

very poignant, another chapter that is part of the whole but a complete mini story unto itself. Wonderful details; and we're waiting to see what unfolds. I really admire how you weave several chapters with different storylines into a larger whole: The arc is never lost, but boy, the chapters are really diverse. I don't know how you write these every few days (!!!)---I write one tale and I'm in traction for a week! (I'm 72, but I can't blame age; it's a cop out. I'm just exhausted after a piece, and you're writing these every few days. I hope your muse never goes out (to use a 'fire' image) which takes me to your comment to my piece:)

You really are on fire; your comment made all kinds of allusions to fire and inner fire, fire in your keyboard, being called by fire, fire that never goes out, etc. Lots of rapture in your words! And you also said something about how, no matter what we write, if we observe it, it's about people. (bad paraphrase, but you understand.) I would add, however, that it's what you do with your characters that makes them so rich. The twists, unexpected revelations, conflicts, resolutions, humor, tenderness, etc; often in the midst of a huge battle or key actions or even storms.

As for my piece having 'allegory'---it could well...I'm not aware of all that comes out of me; I'm the "listener" and so taking dictation; so I often don't know everything I'm 'transcribing' until days after it's done. (Comments help that too---as did yours.) My feeling was, the sun's the progenitor of the planets and, like all stars, all matter and life (should it get that far); so I wanted to put Jack right there, in the center of it all, discoveringl the beginnings. If that's decent allegory (for our quest for beginnings, etc, or whatever else you may have seen), I'm grateful. I greatly appreciated your response. (And if you want to play with a phrase of mine, be my guest! I just put your character into a 27 million degree inferno, so you can certainly mess with a phrase of mine!)

Finally, in your last reply, you said I bring up things you didn't intend. I of course don't know all that means to you, but I can say that I don't know all I'm revealing in my work till after I get away from it; but that's just me. What I feel in your pieces is so clear to me, for what it's worth; but if it's not what you intended, I'm sure I'm bringing my glasses with me (ie, my own filters). For example, my talk of your humor and tender moments: If they aren't intended, you sure have a way with them regardless. (They seem woven into your cells.) And the Ruk stuff was fascinating (their exploits, and all the names you get out of them). Having not read all your previous work, these asides fill in details for me. But don't feel you have to do that often---I don't want you to take time away from your writing! They do help me though,, and I much enjoy them. (I read your replies to others too.)

Ok, this was longer than War and Peace, so I'll stop. Thanks for your wonderful comment. (oh, and the carrot thing was because I loved the idea of Jack eating a simple carrot while he casually uncovers the secrets of the universe. One of my great teachers ate a carrot after speaking some earth-shattering wisdom, and I loved the juxtaposition. If there's something more in that, I'm perfectly open to it!) End of comment. (We writers have big mouths.) Loved the chapter.

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miwi

9:01AM | Thu, 19 August 2021

Brilliant story and image,love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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