Amano Saya - Character Concept Sheet WiP by dos2k3
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Description
This is a character concept I am currently working on. I decided to get some critiques of the Work-In-Progress before I committed any more time to the image (it's taken me a day to do thus far, but I've been trying out some new techniques with illustration and color.) Needless to say, I would love some actual critiques.
This is a character concept for a game that I am currently designing in my spare time, and depending upon response, I'm strongly considering making it an "Eroge Action" game. The gameplay style will be 2.5D.
Please offer your critiques of the character and my technique. I would appreciate productive input, so if you say "It sucks," please tell me why. The same goes for "It rocks."
Thanks in advance for your input!
Comments (6)
Well done by you. Thank you. 5+!
You obviously have genuine artistic talent. With this new character, I can give you my opinion of her. You have five different images, left to right, let's call them 1 -5. I think the face on 3 looks the best. I like image 4, overall, the best. I do not like the boots at all and I never like weapons on pretty women. I understand, for your game, she may need to be armed. But it looks a little like a copy of Tomb Raider. She is a very sexy woman and that is always good. I think the hair of 4 looks best but the ponytail is cute. Any woman sucking an ice cream like that (of 2) looks erotic. You have created a character that can be innocent- looking, sexy-looking and erotic-looking. Well done!
Thanks so much for your input! I appreciate it greatly. I think the Tomb Raider parallel comes from duel wielding weapons, the harness, and the sports bra top. I figured the image would undoubtedly draw parallels like that, but I'm hoping the the images show off a bit of her personality. If you have any suggestions for modifying the boots or clothing, please tell me! Again, I don't want to dedicate too much time to this image if it results in a fail.
Nicely done!
I think they're perfect just the way they are. The white boots on the front facing female looks large but then white would make them look large and once you've coloured them in they will probably blend in with the picture. I like the expressions on the middle 3. There really isn't anything I'd change at all. Your colouring / shading is great.
There are some issues with the drawing itself, some of the positioning. If you'd like some guidelines/redline, leave me an e-mail at buttercupsaiyajin@gmail.com (I rarely check my messages here... ) and I'd be glad to go over this image for you when I have a moment.