Forbidden City I: Moat 3 by lemonjim
Close
Hover over top left image to zoom.
Click anywhere to exit.
Members remain the original copyright holder in all their materials here at Renderosity. Use of any of their material inconsistent with the terms and conditions set forth is prohibited and is considered an infringement of the copyrights of the respective holders unless specially stated otherwise.
Description
whew, thanks to L5 for the comments on la roche, hope it's all satisfactory. Thanks again to Rochr for la roche.
still looking for a good fish! know of any? I want to get this correct!
=) -
Comments (9)
vasquez
What a wonderful composition! Light and texturing are well settled! I can also add a cat walking on the railing
3DKiwi
Terrific work as always. Cheers
tattie
Good composition - however the Trees, Grass/Reeds look a little on the large size. Archictecturally the bridge support seems to be cut from a single piece of stone - in reality this would have been made up so blocks with a Key Stone. And as Vasquez has noted adding someform of "Life" such as a cat, or a bird ot two in the trees or even fish in the water would give this more animation and life. If you have a "Photoshop" type application you might like to consiser some post production work - particularly on the shadows - which are a little bit harsh. Nevertheless this is a good render.
Ev3rM0r3
uh.. u need to get your textures to blend together into one theme..cuz right now ones marble.. ones stone.. another one is wood.. and a fish? use poser and stick a deer or something in the streem.. that would really give it an lifelike appearance.
Kate
this is excellent...worth the effort!!!!
ajtooley
I think this is very well done, particularly in terms of lighting. I do agree with others about working the textures a little. A segmented marble texture on the bridge arch and railing would eliminate that one-piece look.
lemonjim
thanks for your excellent comments - i agree 100%, will make another attempt soon. i'll rescale the grass, maybe add some more. change the texture and mapping on the single big arch, and reconsider the sky. i think i can create a nice fish, but an egret would be way cool!, a deer - now that's interesting, he would be dead meat in china! :) some chinese folks, in period costumes perhaps, oooh even mounted on trusty steeds or in a sedan chair, the preferred transport for royalty! but not tourists with cameras. thanks to all. hope you are not tired of this pic, check back in a week or so.
Freeze
Hmmm, I think its perfect! - I love your stunning composition like that as it am, but its right: there are innumerable possibilities of a change or an addition of it with security!! - - However: we will look all the fantastic variations of your moat, friend!!! :-)
dlewis
James it's coming along really nicely. I checked out your wire frame too and you've got some nice tidy work happening there.