Derrick's Hell by MKeyes

DAZ|Studio • Illustration • posted on Dec 30, 2008

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Bomaw ~ Derrick's Hell The horror, the anguish that attacked Derrick McPherson was unending - all he could think of at this moment, were the words his wife had screamed at him as she threatened to leave him. "You don't get it do you?! This woman is out of her mind! All she see's is you! All she wants is you! And I - am the one person she feels that is standing in her way! What is it going to take before you start taking this serious? You waiting on her to kill me?!" She shouted in a frenzy while packing. Angry because she wanted to deal with her on her terms, but Derrick didn't want that kind of trouble, and stated instead, that he would take out a restraining order. That he would report her to the school board, surely that would make her back off. "Derrick, she knows where we live, where I live! I want her address, after all she knows where I am, now tell me where she lives?!" She demanded. "Meri please! You're going too far with this! If we ignore her, she'll go away!" "She's calling our home Derrick! How many times did she call just this week? And you think she's going to just suddenly give up and leave us alone? She hates me Derrick, she's said as much!" "There's still no need to overreact Meri, once the restraining order is served, that'll be the end of her!" "And if it's not?" "We'll bring charges against her then, I promise." Derrick's hell was, that it was too late, his wife now lie in the emergency room, fighting for her life, because the woman who couldn't take no for an answer stalked him, harrassed his wife, and after being served a restraining order, followed his wife and ran her over in the street. The woman who was the love of his life, mother to his 6 children, now may not live to see tomorrow - and all he wanted, was a way out of his hell! His mother stood before him trying to console him, his sister by his side, too stunned to speak, his children present and the others on the way. He wanted to shout to the heavens and ask why?! But he knew why, it was because he had not heeded his wife's words. "God please, don't let my wife die... please!" ==================== Continued at Bomaw.com ==================== Credits... Daz Studio 2.3.3.146 PSP XI M3 X 2 + morphs V4 X 2 + morphs Milteen Luke MilPreschooler Matt Casualclothes for M3 @ RDNA Backtoschool @ Daz3d Cosmopolitan Dress, pants, shirt Ants'n'pants Mihai hair @ Daz3d Portia hair @ Daz3d Jai hair @ Daz3d Daryl hair @ Daz3d Flat top @ Daz3d P3DA The Lounge - hospital waiting room ===================== Patience will return as soon as I finish remaking them! ===================== Bomaw by me, MKeyes copyright(c)2008 All Rights Reserved http://bomaw.com

Comments (26)

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magnus073

2:39PM | Tue, 30 December 2008

Mercy this is incredible work my friend and really filled with suspense. It reminds me so much of a case I watched the other night from Texas. You did a great job of capturing the emotions of everyone in the room.

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Niha

2:42PM | Tue, 30 December 2008

Wow! What an emotional story and imagE! You got me wanting to hear more... see more... come on with the next!! LOL Outstanding job with the expressions!! Just glad it's Derrick's hell and not mine!

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artposer

2:55PM | Tue, 30 December 2008

Wow really well done hard work here

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Indoda

3:11PM | Tue, 30 December 2008

First class poses and expressions - a lot of excellent and hard work in this image - excellent storyline - all the best for 2009

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MKeyes

3:12PM | Tue, 30 December 2008

I was so proud of this, because finally I have a computer that can handle such a load, but dangit, if the lighting didn't send me around the twist! So that I am not happy about, but I worked on it for so long, that I can tell you now, that I'm done. I have to get back to Patience, but due to Daz Studio 2.3.3.146 - all of my pre-made characters cannot be reloaded, or re-opened, so now I must re-create them all from the model up again. So after I do that, Patience will definitely resume!

ubald

3:26PM | Tue, 30 December 2008

Very nice work MKeyes, both in story and in tech. I know what you mean about PC power or lacking in my case:( But not only dose it teach us Patience it teachs us creativity and finding ways to convey our story;) Solid story telling and very creative artwork, keep up the good work. CHEERs.

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cedarwolf

4:34PM | Tue, 30 December 2008

Lighting aside, this is a good image. The storytelling from the facial expressions and body language expresses loss and anguish well.

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EnaR

4:42PM | Tue, 30 December 2008

Wow, fantastic drama, great scenery, - hope for a happy ending ,o)))))))))))))))

shotgung0d

6:57PM | Tue, 30 December 2008

Lots of figures! Gotta love lots of figures! Yeah the lighting is a weak point in this one. A large waiting area like this would offer a great deal of difficulty regardless of how simple it might seem at first. An acurate emulation of flourescant lighting at the angle of your camera would probably be best using an environment light. UberEnvironment using no light probe around 75% intensity pure white with AO at highest quality. I don't recommend the UE often because of long render times but this scene is crying out for it.

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ds91202

7:53PM | Tue, 30 December 2008

Wow, this is an amazing work! I Love the way you captured Derrick's expression!

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suzymccoy

8:22PM | Tue, 30 December 2008

Loved the story! You captured it all in the picture. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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SandDancr

8:28PM | Tue, 30 December 2008

What's that old adage about always leave them wanting more..... you have done that for sure. Great image. You've captured the expressions and attitudes so well. Amazing work!

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jaynep12002

10:21PM | Tue, 30 December 2008

Wonderful image and story - great work!

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Cimaira

12:44AM | Wed, 31 December 2008

WOW, what a sad story. Wonderful image.

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mikeerson

2:09AM | Wed, 31 December 2008

Quite a story... I hope it's all make belief... I know that crap goes on everywhere... and when you think you got it bad, talk to someone else.... Life can suck. In under 3 years, I've lost 3 people close to me by death... 2 was by suicide - people can mess each other up emotionally... Shame we can't go back to the cave man days - forget that, they didn't have toilet paper - lol Fantastic picture and story - well done.

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UteBigSmile

3:17AM | Wed, 31 December 2008

Nice story my dear and a wonderful render. I wish you a Happy new Year 2009, hug's Ute

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ToniDunlap

3:38AM | Wed, 31 December 2008

Well Sis, as you know, I am so touched. Saw this image and couldn't comment until I finished Series 11. Yep, the cliffhanger. I am reminded above of Meribels's urging Derrick to let her handle it her way. Maybe that wasn't so good an idea either because that woman is a "Boss Nut". The story is so fine and so very well written. And now that you have that computer that can do what your brain would have it do, wondrous images will spill out, just like this one. You should be very proud of it. Because it depicts this point in time wonderfully. What you wrote is sure what we see. Magnificent!!! I am just too proud of you. Hugs a Plenty.

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