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SCRYING IN THE MIST

Writers People posted on Mar 06, 2007
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Sometimes the most commonplace of conditions or events seem to portend radical changes in your life: reading the signs and chosing directions is, however, not so easy. Ahead is the only option. *scrying = divining by gazing into crystal, glass, clear pools SCRYING IN THE MIST This fog, more tangible than retinal codes, or a pulse along a nerve more solid than an invert image fashioned on a cortical screen, advises stealth. The way ahead, once clear, escapes, dissipates amid the soft grey particles. Wayside landmarks wear an air of strangeness and no beacon points the way. Ahead a soot-stained map of misty calligraphy wrought by an unfamiliar hand. This fog's breath has frosted the sheen of the scrying glass, wagged a warning finger at the travelling man, laid a masking veil across the path. There is no ceremony for this: no rite of passage; no footprint to guide the way. It is unbeknown, unremembered, unforeseen. The wind is dead, the frost thick in the air and the nerves uncertain: a longing for sweet sleep. The night is soundless, Though the breeze begins to stir. Unforeseen, then: the forebrain functions well; nerves rhythmically vibrate and generate an annulus of incandescent light before the eyes; senses fine-tuned, alert. Unremembered: only the wind's low wail - a sibilance, a whistle through teeth; a blade of cold breath cuts clean. Yes, the wind fluting eerie and musical as the night creeps on. Unbeknown: the nerve-coils untwist, and the poisons in the blood slowly drain away. The way ahead is wearisome, the senses strained, the movements taut and tentative and slow. But move we must, there's no way back, and forward we must go.

Comments (23)


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eternalwytch1

7:26AM | Tue, 06 March 2007

Very powerful Mike.

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STEVIEUKWONDER

7:37AM | Tue, 06 March 2007

Magnificent words Mike. Absolutely top class Sir! Steve :o)

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NekhbetSun

8:02AM | Tue, 06 March 2007

I think you and I both know a thing or two about scrying, don't we... Irregardless, I really like this poem and for the first time since reading your work, you sent me scurrying for the dictionary...had to look up annulus ... I defer to the word master :o) Brilliant work dear Mike ! ~ Hugs ~ Photobucket - Video and Image Hosting

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Mondwin

8:13AM | Tue, 06 March 2007

Superb poem and fantastic creative image..bravo!!V:DDD.Hugsxx

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auntietk

8:45AM | Tue, 06 March 2007

Yes - all one can do is take a deep breath, choose, and move forward. Saying you can't decide, haven't chosen, is just a choice that leaves you standing in the mist, hoping for salvation.

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helanker

8:46AM | Tue, 06 March 2007

Very beautiful.

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romanceworks

8:57AM | Tue, 06 March 2007

Scrying ... what an intriguing word ... and poem. 'the fog's breath has frosted the sheen'. Oh, so many incredible images painted with your poetry. This really takes me on a mystical journey -. CC

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Skydancer917

9:35AM | Tue, 06 March 2007

Wonderful words, Michael!!

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A_Sunbeam

11:35AM | Tue, 06 March 2007

Nice graphics and colours. I especially like the way you vary the style of the typography and choice of types.

kaliwright

11:45AM | Tue, 06 March 2007

absolutely beautiful :0)

Valerie-Ducom

1:00PM | Tue, 06 March 2007

As always it's a pleasure to reading this lovely words from you my friend !!! Bisous et bonne journ :)

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miashadows

1:04PM | Tue, 06 March 2007

Such wonderful work,very touching and powerful.as I can relate to this confusion and tiredness,the road ahead is never clear,finding your way in darkness.Your words very wise-exellent art

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RodolfoCiminelli

1:06PM | Tue, 06 March 2007

Absolutely wonderful realization Mike....!!!

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mamabobbijo

4:49PM | Tue, 06 March 2007

This has truly painted a picture. Enchanting as it hits a chord and resonates within each of us. A place we all have been, and will be again. BJ

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TallPockets

5:28PM | Tue, 06 March 2007

Brilliantly written and artworked! (I have been known to be seen 'crying' in the mist). WINK. My best to you and yours, T.P.

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hipps13

8:15AM | Wed, 07 March 2007

Moving forward is hard but is the best path to take Falling backwards just causes more pain Nice work

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kansas

10:44AM | Wed, 07 March 2007

Very moving words. We are pushed forward even though we do not wish to take a step.

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jo_dis

11:28AM | Wed, 07 March 2007

This is so well done, there's nothing more to add!

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tofi

10:09PM | Wed, 07 March 2007

This is an interesting piece, that matches themes and style very effectively. The title suggests a seeking soul lost in the fog. Not a simple setting, is it? I can imagine novels that communicate less on the subject. The opening stanza sets the tone. The fog is more tangible than the very instruments with which we seek to pierce it. This is so true when we are caught in life. When we no longer know the way, the fact that we are lost is more overpowering than the desire to keep moving forward. At least for awhile. It drives more deeply into the human psyche than we are often willing to admit. Behind the senses, behind our own capacity to understand, is the desire to know the way and to follow it. More solid than an invert image is the fog that hides the way. Interestingly, we can start to get a grasp on our surroundings, only to lose the way again. In the same way, the poem begins with such cold, almost clinical language and imagery, and as you start to feel as though you have a grasp of what is happening, the second stanza flips the script. Here, all is natural, though no less revealing. Still present is the sense of needing to know the way, but being kept from it. The fog is writing to us a map of misty calligraphy that we are incapable of reading. Possibly the most difficult fact to face is also addressed here, that we once saw the way so clearly, or thought we did. We saw a way, and believed it to be the way. Perhaps we lose sight of it, or perhaps we realize it is an inferior path. Either way, whether led slowly and manipulative out into the desert, into the fog, or unceremoniously dumped there by our own stupidity, we end up there, misguided and unsure. Even scrying into the depths of the spirit-realm brings no insight, as the fog reaches there too. The clinical, the natural, the supernatural, all outer sources offer no aide. All that remains is our own resolve. The fog, blinding as it can be, is only a psychological barrier, after all. It has no mass, no physical substance by which to withhold us. But just as Scrying in the Mist informs us, the way ahead is wearisome and we need to summon the will to act. Present in all human life, but so often dormant is this power to get up from where we are, and move forward to the place we desire to be. One last time, as the poem comes to a close there is one last poke at the senses, as the last line provides the only true rhyme, reminding the reader that this is in fact poetry, and not a position piece, or Sydney-esque essay on prose. And true enough, onward we must go. The poem does not fail to surprise, move, and motivate thought and introspection. It drives you inward first, then outward. As the effect of the poem takes full force, it releases you into the fog, into the freedom that comes only after making the choice to step, as nerve-coils untwist the reader is set loose into the great unknown.

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JillianElf

11:38PM | Sat, 10 March 2007

One of my favorite words, and a wonderful piece of writing work! You really captured something we all go through in such an insightful way! Thank you!

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amirapsp

2:23PM | Wed, 14 March 2007

Beautifull work...

Wolfspirit

11:30PM | Sun, 18 March 2007

Thanks Mike.

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leanndra

6:14PM | Tue, 08 April 2008

Once again, your words paint amazing pictures upon my mind!


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