Woman2 by MCML

Cinema 4D • Realism • posted on Jul 16, 2003

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Description

Hi there! I have remodeled a good part of my Onna No Hito head model and this is the result. The procedural skin is still not optimal but just good enough for a quick presentation, I think. This is just another perspective of Woman1 with better eyebrows, still not optimal. Modeled in C4D, procedural shaders in C4D, lips and eyes textures painted in Photoshop. ALBEDO (MCML)

Comments (5)

ron_mcphatty

11:46AM | Wed, 16 July 2003

its looking amazing! apart from the eye brows, definitely not thick and straight enough. skins good, love the very reflective lips

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Nod

2:24PM | Wed, 16 July 2003

Looks very nice indeed.

3DDesigner

9:03PM | Wed, 16 July 2003

Hi looking good, but here some comments/crits meant constructive. Skin is to regular. Needs much more irregularity, like specling it, creating little wrinkles, tiny folds, some thin little hairs on the face (you know even the nicest woman has hairs in her face...;). The Eyelashes are far too regular, need more random directions, maybe some clamping. The eyebrows, well, do them again ;) Eyes are nice but the inner corner is too sharp. The skin is too red, needs some translucent side effects or at least a bit of fresnel. The overall shape is pretty nice though and I like the nose. Work on it a little bit more and it will turn out nicely. Best Samir

pingo

7:13AM | Thu, 17 July 2003

Hiya MCML. I think you've done an awesome job modeling this face. You should do something (and I'm probably gonna get lynched for saying this): Check out how the eyebrows are done on poser models. It's actually pretty clever. btw, the lipgloss is exelent.

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6:00PM | Thu, 17 July 2003

Well, I don't know anything about Cinema 4D or modelling, so I don't know how much you will appreciate my comment... either way - here's my humble opinion as someone who just sees this picture: I really love her face, the "bone" structure is really good, she's completely beautiful. The lips and teeth are wonderful, and I do like that nose. The eyebrows and eyelashes need some extra work... I love her eyes' shape and their texture. I think that once you fix the eyebrows and eyelashes it will really look a whole lot better, more... "finished". On the other hand - what do I know? :) That's it, now you can stone me for talking about things I don't understand (oh, and if you need another reason - I also use Poser... a lot!) :)