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The Maiden----Part 5...(The Knight)...Conclusion

Writers Fantasy posted on Sep 16, 2008
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It was then that the girl came back inside. Euqine looked at her, and He could not believe what His eyes were seeing. No longer was there a girl with dirt upon her skin, the tangled, knotted, unkept hair and tattered sheet she wore for clothing.... No, not at all.... Before Him stood a beautiful woman, hair as bright as the afternoon sun, falling softly against her shoulders. Her eyes as blue as a crystal clear stream, untouched by man or beast. Her skin so soft and milky white, her smile as beautiful as the most beautiful sunset. He looked upon her with wonderment and said, "The girl will go to Loxsley this day, with Me." Patrick gave to them a white horse for the girl and together they left Nellbar heading to Loxsley. Angel watched the stranger called Euqine with great interest and amazement. Could He be Him, her Knight? He had rescued her, He had the black horse and she had seen the armor and His sword. His eyes were of the man she had seen countless times in her dreams of Him. Everything about Him seemed so familiar. They stopped to rest the horses and talk some more. He told her of His home in Loxsley and that she would stay with Him until other arrangements could be made. As night fell, they arrived at His home. Angel gasped aloud as her eyes fell upon His home. There before her was the castle she had seen so many times in her dreams. He helped her down from her horse. She stepped into His arms and Their eyes locked. He cupped her face in His hands and leaned forward, kissing her. In the distance she heard the voice of her Mother..."Beautiful dreamer." A smile grazed Angel’s lips hearing her mother’s voice as she silently answered, "Yes Mama, he has come, he has come." Her dream had come true, her Knight was here with her. He had found her and taken her to His kingdom. Here They would live happily ever after..... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~The End?????~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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mikeerson

12:53AM | Tue, 16 September 2008

I thought she was going to wake up with her Mom saying: "You want some Bacon and Eggs?" - hey, it could happen - lol... You write fairy tales like you're painting your 3D images. Since you know both worlds, I think you could illustrate this with your images and put the words in a READABLE but old english type font... Maybe the background could be old cloth like an old treasure map. Enjoyed.

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beachzz

11:48AM | Tue, 16 September 2008

What a great story, and the stuff fantasies are made of, good triumphs over evil and dreams DO come true!!

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davidoblad

12:44PM | Tue, 16 September 2008

Most excellent fairytale Marcy. It's great when dreams come to pass. Bravo and hugs from Dave :^)

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ontar1

1:57PM | Tue, 16 September 2008

Wonderful story and conclusion, excellent work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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myquad

3:46PM | Tue, 16 September 2008

What a sweet, lovely tale. You're a gifted writer! Hugs, Holly

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lior

6:00PM | Tue, 16 September 2008

Such a great story!

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vaggabondd

8:30PM | Wed, 17 September 2008

I do believe in fairy tales and this is a nice one. :)

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Jay-el-Jay

10:41PM | Fri, 19 September 2008

A nice conclusion to this sweet fantasy.Don't we all wish that our own dreams would be fulfilled so nicely.

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Blush

1:48AM | Wed, 03 December 2008

Ohhhhhhh Love the ending... Beautiful sis Hugs Susan~


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