Eternal Love by SusiQ
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Description
Her heart was tearing as he walked away
She prayed so hard that he would stay
That he would fall in love so deep
and be forever hers to keep.
But at that moment he slowly turned
She knew right then she was not spurned
Her heart leaped up with relief and joy
This gentle, wise person still yet a boy.
They had such fun throughout the years
Full of laughter, fun and yes, some tears.
They could not last, this bright young love
So now he watches from up above.
He guides and cherishes her every day
Keeps watch unseen as she fades away
He knows that they will be united
When what went wrong will now be righted
He sees her love has never dimmed
and on her eyes those tears they brimmed
And as she breathed her final air
She joined him as the perfect pair.
Comments (7)
PeeWee05
Heartbreaking and heartwarming. Great.
eternalwytch1
Beautiful
drace68
It's early morning here in the US, and I stumbled over "So now he watches from up above." Now I see you wanted the reader to change direction. Good job -- Dick
SusiQ
Lol.Thanks all. Yep Dick, a cool slide to the left that one... Wasn't sure if it was going to fit in.
Starchild
One of those things that makes you want to cry from being upset, and yet comforted. Nicely done. :)
Meezan
Good job
TallPockets
Wonderfully written. Now, Please pass old grumpy T.P. a hanky.