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I often hear from people who post in the galleries that they
wish more people would give "useful critiques". That
they're tired of hearing, "Oh wow, that's great!" or
"Super job!" when they know their picture needs
improvements. Or on the other hand, getting trolling comments like,
"This sucks!"
When I asked people in the Poser forum what stops them from
giving critiques, I got a variety of answers:
"I'm not sure if the person wants to hear it."
"I tried that once and the artist got really upset."
"I feel intimidated because most artists here are better than
me."
"I don't know how to put it into words - I'm afraid I'll
offend the artist."
"Someone once told me that they knew someone who had a friend
whose brother got banned for giving negative comments."
"When I see all the gushing comments already on a picture, it
makes me feel stupid or nasty to point out the flaws."
This article will show you how to give constructive criticism
that is helpful to the artist, and how to accept critique on your
own works. And the best thing is, you can apply this technique to
any kind of feedback or critique - from the Renderosity galleries,
through to employee coaching!
Part 1: Giving Critique
The aim of critique should always be to help the artist. When
you critique, you are giving the gift of feedback. You should not
be critiquing out of a desire to hurt the artist or to show off
your own knowledge or skills. The ideal result is that the artist
learns something that will help them improve (either on this work,
or future images.)
Step 1 - Assess the image
Critique shouldn't be rushed. If you are going to give someone
the benefit of your opinion, make sure it's a considered opinion
and not just a first impression.
It's sometimes hard to know where to start. Asking yourself
these questions may help:
- What is my first impression of the image?
- Does that impression change as I look at the image more
closely?
- How does the image make me feel? Sad, warm, happy,
frightened?
- Does the image evoke any other senses? For example, "The
grass is so detailed that I can practically smell it," or
"I can almost hear the birds singing."
- What elements of the image stand out for you? Colours,
lighting, textures?
- What is my favourite part of this image? or what do I feel is
really done well? The pose, the colour balance, the shadows, the
model's expression, etc.
- What do I feel could be improved? Should the shadows be
stronger, the lighting brighter? Are there elements that don't
"fit" - perhaps a photo-realistic texture next to
something obviously painted?
Step 2 - Compose your critique
First things first - imagine that you are in the artist's shoes.
Always compose your critique carefully and consider their
feelings.
The generally-accepted format for critique (or any form of
coaching or feedback) is called the Praise Sandwich. It's named
that way because the idea is to put two positive things (the bread)
around a negative aspect (the filling.) This avoids giving a wholly
negative critique, which can feel dispiriting for both you and the
subject. Here is an example of the praise sandwich method:
"I really like the way you've got the lighting - the
shadows falling across the model's face give a very dramatic look.
I do think you need to work on the pose - her left arm in
particular looks very awkward. Facial expression is just right -
she looks as if she's about to burst out laughing!"
Here are some other general guidelines that you can follow when
critiquing:
- Check if the artist has written any comments that may affect
your critique - are they looking for comments on something
specific? If so, try to concentrate on that aspect.
- Always be specific. "Lighting doesn't work" is not
very useful; "the lighting is too dim for me to see the
character clearly - try putting another spotlight in" is much
more helpful.
- Talk about the picture, NOT the artist! "Your modelling
skills are non-existent" is a putdown. "The model seems
unfinished - has it been uv-mapped? Will you be cleaning up the
rough edges?" is both more specific and much more
civilised.
- If you can't see anything that you feel could be improved,
comment specifically on the best aspects of the image. Your
comments will help the artist learn where their strengths lie and
what they got right in this image.
- If possible, give ideas or advice for improvement. For example,
"Try looking through the shadow cams to give you a better
preview of where the shadows will fall."
- Always be honest! If you don't like something, say so. Don't
worry about disagreeing with previous comments - this is your
review and nobody else's!
- Don't try to candy-coat your words. "It's just my humble
opinion, but..." or "I'm sorry but I think I can see a
tiny little problem..." and other such phrases should be
expunged from your vocabulary! Phrases like this are a kind of
"safety net" - they tend to be used where there is a fear
of upsetting the person critiqued. But instead they can read as
patronising or false.
- Consider your audience. This is an international site - is the
artist a native English speaker? Write clearly and avoid
slang.
And the golden rule...
Always read through your critique before posting it,
again putting yourself in the artist's shoes. Will your comments
help the artist improve?
In the second part of this article, you will learn how to accept
critique and use it to improve and grow as an artist.
Come and join the
"Critique Club" [in the Poser Forum]- a group of
like-minded artists who have joined together to give and receive
honest criticism. This is open to ALL artists.
Karen Janes
[karen1573] is an artist, writer, and vendor on Renderosity.
She is also Moderator in the Poser and
Copyright Laws and Ethical Standards forums, as
well as serving as a Senior MarketPlace Tester.
Be sure to visit:
Karen's
Renderosity Art Gallery
Karen's
Renderosity Store
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