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Early Calls

Member Since Jul 14, 2007
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I wrote this several months ago. Things have changed, but I still like this a lot.

Early Calls

That siren call
First thing
In the morning
Rouses me
Out of a sound sleep
I know it's you
I pick up the phone
Listen as you talk
I hear it
Through the fog
Of semi consciousness
You wake me up
Quickly with your
Soft sweet sexy voice
No matter what
You might say to me
Hey babe I hear
And it melts my heart
Sometimes the talk
Is nothing special
Sometimes it's
Lots more
Touches me
In places
Way down deep

It's never enough
These short little
Times we have
Just teasers of
What I know
Then you're gone
On with your day
I lie back
And think about
What could be

I know what
It has been
How it is

Hearing your voice
Makes me want more

September 2, 2009
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Sep 2, 2009 3:14:33 am

by durleybeachbum Homepage »

Sep 2, 2009 3:16:25 am
It's very personal. Sweet words.

by frankman Homepage »

Sep 2, 2009 4:49:47 am
Sublime......bravissima!*V*:DDD.Hugsxx Whylma

by Mondwin Homepage »

Sep 2, 2009 5:03:37 am
Remarkable work!

by Alex_Antonov Homepage »

Sep 2, 2009 7:27:47 am
I know that feeling when a certain voice does that lately I am fully conversant with these opening words, good pour out sweetie, hope you are having fun on the CA jaunt :)

by PD154 Homepage »

Sep 2, 2009 7:48:40 am

by THROBBE Homepage »

Sep 2, 2009 8:26:31 am
Very beautiful words:-)

by Rainastorm Homepage »

Sep 2, 2009 8:49:05 am
lovely written x

by 3x3 Homepage »

Sep 2, 2009 9:07:02 am
Very well done! You've conveyed the mood so well. Beautiful work!

by auntietk Online Now!   Homepage »

Sep 2, 2009 9:11:36 am
very lovely!

by flavia49 Homepage »

Sep 3, 2009 8:54:54 pm
Very soft words but powerful too. I like it.


by danapommet Homepage »

Sep 5, 2009 10:53:08 pm
Lovely words and mood. Very well written.

by myrrhluz Homepage »

Sep 14, 2009 7:59:39 pm
ditto tara & others. I know the feeling in my past, and everyone else does as well. You stated it well and in your usual musical rhythms. And the image is peaceful and inviting like the poem. Nice couplet at end, a nice conclusion. A very sunny & positive work Marilyn...

by anahata.c Homepage »


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