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The Snake Charmer - Version Two

jaynep12002
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Thanks for all the comments and suggestions on my last image, also called the Snake Charmer.

I've taken a number of the suggestions and incorporated them into this reworked image, which I think turned out way better.

I changed the poses, added skin shader and spent a long time playing around with the lighting and shadows.

I learned a lot from this image - the most important of which is how much more there is still to learn about this great program!

Thanks in advance for your comments.
Production Credits
Danie - Rituals, by Danie and Marforno
marforno - Rituals by Danie and Marfono
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Uploaded
May 20, 2007
Gallery
DAZ|Studio
Genre
Fantasy
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291.8 kB
Dimensions
709x579

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May 20, 2007 9:35:24 pm
Time well spend!!
As for me, the light is excellent!! The sun shine's in the right angle(see shadows) on her.

by Pankaj Homepage »

May 20, 2007 9:59:49 pm
very well done

by thales Homepage »

May 20, 2007 10:29:50 pm
DLG- cuddling with your snake,naked in the cool night air, now who doesn't do that? It turned out great,and you captured the feeling, great job!

by unrulywitch Homepage »

May 20, 2007 10:31:26 pm
Belissima obra, aplausos (5)

by flaviok Homepage »

May 20, 2007 10:49:54 pm
DLG- - ->

Render it larger please! I love this, great composition and posing. About the only thing I do like better from the first would be the lighting, this one seems a bit dark but not by enough to hurt it. Beautiful skin on your character.

by shotgung0d Homepage »

May 20, 2007 11:01:32 pm
DLG~This turned out great! the posing is very well done as well as the lighting. I am also struggling with lighting.

by Amethst25 Homepage »

May 20, 2007 11:09:49 pm
Shotgun0d -- it's the same skin, it just looks better because I used a skin shader and the lighting helps enhance it too :) As I said, this one was a learning experience :)

by jaynep12002 Homepage »

May 20, 2007 11:35:12 pm
DLG- The snake looks great. The texture & pose look perfect. The problem I have with the young lady is the right shoulder looks a little awkward - It just throws the flow off (for me, at least). I know about problems with lights, I'm still experimenting myself, but when you use a background with a visibly bright lightsource as part of the image, your shadows should flow from it, not towards it. I know it's not the 'real' light source for the piece, but if it's there, you need to consider it. Keep it up!! Cheers!

by Gojira95 Homepage »

May 20, 2007 11:36:19 pm
Very nice improvements, posing is stellar ^_^ That being said, the "sitting on snake" concept, although generally not well-liked....... Well let's just say I thought it was very creative and although it could have used a bit more "polish", I thought it was a great concept and it could have worked. Who cares if it wouldn't work in real life? What you create is from your own world of the minds eye. Besides, does anyone truely realize how strong a snake of that size really is? *grumble* anyway I know I'm not super popular ^_^

5+*****

by swjkie100 Homepage »

May 21, 2007 1:16:11 am
DLG, that's a favourite! I agree that your light source should come from the direction of the sun on the bgr. As for the shoulder, I have that effect frequently and sometimes succeed smearimg it out in GIMP (postwork), but it is a delicate issue!

by thotto Homepage »

May 21, 2007 1:22:37 am
DLG,
Awesome artwork. Love the pose's. Great job...

by mcyak72 Homepage »

May 21, 2007 2:41:04 am
DLG

Brilliant work. The poses are very good.

by mhossack Homepage »

May 21, 2007 3:00:40 am
i admire the work you've put into this. both concepts are superb. well done !

by leehilliard Homepage »

May 21, 2007 3:32:57 am
DLG
Ok love it very good improvements and overall affect is superb one or two bits have issues the right shoulder but this was indicated, the light also there is a slight prob with the left elbow it looks a bit collapsed this sitting on snake thing trust me on this one that size can take a full grown persons on it back it would probably eat you if you did but it is possible LOL the render with the issues is very, very good and I do love it, it is sexy and sensual and well put together 5+ from me keep it up

by robin123 Homepage »

May 21, 2007 4:35:18 am
Superb and fantastic work...bravissimo!*V*:DDD.Hugsxx

by Mondwin Homepage »

May 21, 2007 8:45:24 am
DLG...
Babes, you are on your way! First - thank you for taking the pointers to heart and working on making it better! This is stunning. You keep going because you are definitely on the right track!

by MKeyes Homepage »

May 21, 2007 10:49:51 am
DLG - wow another great render, Nice improvement over the first version. I think this one has a better feel to it great job.

by sjallen03 Homepage »

May 21, 2007 12:18:03 pm
DLG

Great work! I agree with sjallen03 in that there is better feel to it... for me it is the lighting. I think that the light here makes the objects feel heavier, but I like darker lighting.

I swear that snake has a smile too... how strange.

by evoluzione33 Homepage »

May 21, 2007 12:18:54 pm
DLG... You improved this a lot. The posing is much better and more natural. I don't think the shoulder problem mentioned is all that important. It could just be the camera angle. Well done!

by MKruczek Homepage »

May 21, 2007 3:01:27 pm
DLG
This is much BETTER! Great hard work payed off! Excellent!

by Niha Homepage »

May 21, 2007 3:07:02 pm
DLG;0])
Wonderful work here and the lighting is fantastic Here!!

by GARNETROSE Homepage »

May 21, 2007 4:37:52 pm
DLG :) Love the way you changed the lighting and pose from the original to make a much improved image. The sunlight that bathes her body looks fantastic, and the shadows cast from an off camera lightsource work really well to give the image more depth.
Excellent :)

by Star4mation Homepage »

May 21, 2007 6:40:30 pm
DLG..

Ohhh!!! I like this pose much better, and the lighting is top notch!
Primo my friend!

by gandalf_1 Homepage »

May 22, 2007 8:15:15 am
DLG

There is a fine line between constructive comments and nitpiking.

You did a wonderful job reworking this image!

by KyotoDragon Homepage »

May 22, 2007 4:48:25 pm
DLG, great image, that skin shaders the biz.

by ThomasMacCallum Homepage »

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