Cadet Mab Won't give up!

Writers Comics/Cartoons posted on Sep 13, 2022
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(This scene takes place right after Mab is told the story of "Cubes and Kings" and before the Van Artell and Water Park stories!) Cadet Mab had absorbed all the power of Dahn Bossik's Ownership cube! Now he was determined to also free Dahn from Bay Tellis's control! Dahn had been Bay's slave since he was five years old, and now that Mab was Dahn's new "Master", he was putting his own need for privacy aside to try and help his fellow Cadet have some kind of life on his own! "I Can't believe the Quartermaster gave us a room in this block!" Dahn said as they walked down the Academy hallway together. "When I told him we needed new quarters because we were becoming bunk-mates and you were in a single, he practically chewed my head off!" Mab sighed. How did he get himself in this situation? "I've been rooming by myself! We can't share my bunk-room! It only has one bunk! It used to be a spare broom closet!" Mab said. "But, Master! He said no changing rooms, until you came and talked to him!" Dahn replied. "I have never seen anything like it! You stood right up to him!" "Dahn, he wanted you to sleep on the hard floor!" Mab answered. "I know Quartermaster Tom was angry we talked to him this late, but it had to be done! I told him that having you sleep in a single wasn't acceptable and it would look strange!" "Master Mab, you were looking away! You didn't see how his eyes suddenly glazed over and he started smiling at you! The next thing I knew, we had a really great room!" "Dahn, please stop with calling me Master!" Mab said gently. "As far as I am concerned, you are a free person!" "No! No, Master Mab!" Dahn shook his head. "You said I was free to do whatever I wanted, but only the Guild can truly free a slave!" "Well, let's just pretend, shall we?" Mab said. "I am not a slaver or in the guild! So just consider me a friend, Okay?" "If that is what you wish, Master!" Dahn replied with a smile! "I mean, Sir!" "No! Your the Sir! Your Academy rank is higher than mine!" Mab reminded him as they walked into their bright new bunk-room! "I am glad the Quartermaster's gone! I was afraid when we stepped out to get our stuff, he would change his mind!" Dahn said. "This is really a nice room! Much better than Bay's, and he's rich!" "Well!! Finally I can put a new shirt on!" Mab said as he started unpacking his things "It seems like I have been running around shirtless for months! No more Auto-fit shirts for me!" Mab and Dahn hurried to get their things unpacked and stowed, as it was almost lights out! Mab wandered if he could make this work? Being alone was natural to him and Dahn was quite a handful! Would he be able to adjust and keep Dahn a free person? Or would Bay or the Slaving Guild try and take away Dahn's new freedom? To Be Continued A Cadet's Story-Chapter 39 PREVIOUS CHAPTER: A Cadet's Story-Who is Cadey Mab? Part 38 Cadet Mab continues to tell Gamon Halt, The Overlord's right hand, why he believes he will soon be killed by the Overlord. (This part of the story is told in prose form) *********The StarBracer/Cadet Mab saga**************** This saga is about StarBracer, a galactic super-powered hero who fights against the tyranny of Galactic overlord Evan Grell, who rules the Zytron empire with an Iron fist of cruelty. Character profiles: This is Mab Elon MAB ELON at Empire Academy Cadet Mab's girlfriend-Linara Brightheart MAB ELON and LINARA BRIGHTHART Mab's friend Tank Melton Mab meets Tank Melton Starbracer-AKA Tryon Khrys STARBRACER Galactic Overlord Evan Grell Princess Zeltron and rebel leader Finnegan Black Our saga begins with the story of a young, eighteen-year old cadet, Mab Elon, who is abducted from his military academy in the early evening and is to be brought to Overlord Evan Grell. Chapter one: a Cadet's Story **************thank you for Viewing!************

Comments (15)


eekdog 11:50AM | Tue, 13 September 2022

That's the spirit! Go cadet Mab. Another masterpiece.

CoolDimension 5:46AM | Fri, 16 September 2022

Thanks so very much, Steve! I appreciate it very much!


Radar_rad-dude 12:22PM | Tue, 13 September 2022

Very good continuation! Excellent art work! Bravo all the way around, my friend! Many super fine kudos!!!!

CoolDimension 5:47AM | Fri, 16 September 2022

Thank you so very much, Radar! I always appreciate it!


RodS 5:32PM | Tue, 13 September 2022

Great artwork, and the story just keeps getting better.

CoolDimension 5:48AM | Fri, 16 September 2022

I really appreciate those kind words, Rod! Thank you so much for your kind comments!


APlusDesign 8:48PM | Tue, 13 September 2022

Excited for the next part of the story!

CoolDimension 5:50AM | Fri, 16 September 2022

That encouragement means a lot to me! Thank you so very much!


starship64 1:30AM | Wed, 14 September 2022

Fantastic work!

CoolDimension 5:51AM | Fri, 16 September 2022

Thank you so very much! I appreciate it!


uncollared 7:01AM | Wed, 14 September 2022

Love there expressions and posing. Nice work

CoolDimension 5:51AM | Fri, 16 September 2022

Thank you so much! I appreciate it very much!


MagikUnicorn 8:22AM | Wed, 14 September 2022


CoolDimension 5:52AM | Fri, 16 September 2022

Thank you so much for the kind words! I appreciate it!


Leije 9:24AM | Wed, 14 September 2022

Very expressive scene !

CoolDimension 5:52AM | Fri, 16 September 2022

Thank you so much! I appreciate it!


TerraMoore 6:17PM | Wed, 14 September 2022

Great expressions. Poor Mab has a lot of work ahead of him, but he has a good heart :)

CoolDimension 5:53AM | Fri, 16 September 2022

Thank you for the kind comments and kind words about Mab, I appreciate it very much!


Paulienchen 1:22AM | Fri, 16 September 2022

Das sieht gut aus gefällt mir

CoolDimension 5:54AM | Fri, 16 September 2022

Thank you so very much! I appreciate it!


MeInOhio 9:22PM | Sat, 17 September 2022

Nice work! Great expressions!

CoolDimension 1:23AM | Sun, 18 September 2022

Thank you so very much!! I appreciate it!!


virginiese 10:12AM | Wed, 21 September 2022

Yes, he seems confident ! Sometimes, I wish I coud be so self confident ! Great artwork !

CoolDimension 10:36PM | Wed, 21 September 2022

Thank you so much for the kind words,! Yes, I agree, confidence is so important! I appreciate you viewing and commenting!


Flint_Hawk 1:21PM | Thu, 22 September 2022

I like this part of the story & where it has gone a lot!

CoolDimension 9:00PM | Fri, 23 September 2022

Thank you so much, Flint_Hawk! I Appreciate the kind remarks!


UteBigSmile 4:17PM | Sat, 24 September 2022

This new graphic, looks as always very nice! I am very sorry for the copy/paste comments, but otherwise I can not manage them all and because of my spine I have no other choice. I wish you a good new week and stay safe and cheerful, because something happened so fast.

CoolDimension 4:48PM | Sat, 24 September 2022

Thank you so very much,Ute! I appreciate it very much!


perpetualrevision 3:58PM | Sun, 25 September 2022

What a tricky spot for both Dahn and Mab to be in, but I hope things work out well for both of them! However, the fact that the Quartermaster's eyes glazed over before they were given a "really great room" has me a little worried. Perhaps the room is a little too great??

CoolDimension 7:57AM | Mon, 26 September 2022

Thank you so much for the kind words! Yes, you are very much correct! The room is way nicer than someone on a scholarship would ever get at the academy! Mab has that effect on people and it's all subconscious, he isn't aware of it and wouldn't do that to anyone! Bay figured it out and deliberately didn't tell Mab! Mab isn't really aware that he is now more powerful than most people in the galaxy!

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