Haiku Tears by auntietk
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Haiku Tears
Oh so sad today
Remembering the good times
Miss you far too much
Nice to think about
But they are gone forever
Those glorious days
Never coming back
Broke my heart to say goodbye
The end so final
So much easier
If I didn't love you still
Trying to move on
It's just that today
I could feel your tender touch
Part of you remains
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Going through some (very) old files, I realized I'd never posted this one. It was an exercise in continuous Haiku, and I remember the most difficult thing was finding a place to STOP!
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Title page created in ArtRage and Photoshop
Font is Isadora Caps
Comments (23)
Wonderful Poem Good Night
Wow! excellent!
Super. Was this prompted by a loss?
nice work...
Tender Tara, heartfelt words, one never knows what to say in these situations, except know there are real friends here, I have never been a bear of a guy, quite the opporsite, but those shoulders have been cried on many times.
You would have won the contest in Shogun! Great work!
This is so beautiful and moving.
Poignant words, more familiar than I care to think about at times. I love the Haiku form; it tells a story in such a short, intense way.
Lost loves are still warm memories to cherish. Beautifully expressed here. Have never tried the Haiku form...appears challenging but worthwhile things don't come easy.
But we are lucky, us who still have the Sweet memories in our mind. Beautiful poem Taea.
I can empathise with these words.
Mmmmmmm - way too close for comfort for me today.... You have struck a tender sinew in my soul with this Tara... But you know that.. don't you?? Stywe druk en baie soene! x0x0x0x
Continous haiku...mmm, as Bill says, quite a challenge. I have made single ones. Thhis is very good.
great!
beautiful work, Tara May can remember the smiles too warm hugs and love, Linda Kaye
Beautiful... Haiku unfortunately is beyond my abilities as a writer:-) Very touching...
terrific work!!
I love the poem.it really touches!
very touching...but very nice Tara
Very touching.
awww such sad words beautifully written
yep, hard to stop (lol), but the flow is strong & your images & rhythms are strong too. It's so strange to see a lament from you: Even when you write of devastating events, you have resolve & light in your words. This is an unrequited vision, and it's almost fun to see it coming from you!
Beautiful work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!