~~Surrender Serenity~~ by Blush
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Do you hear the water whispering?
It's voice soft, sensuous, beckoning seductively
Surrender...
Enchanted I concede
Stalked by unbridled
Desire...
Entangled in icy grips as it surreptitiously draws
My gaze into its soul
Exotic shades of terror and
Exhilaration...
As the water writhes in bittersweet agony
Externally haunted
By ghosts of the undead
Passion...
The salty tribute of my heart
Caress the liquid angst,
As I succumb
To tast the unforbidden
Ecstasy
Suddenly my essence takes flight
Searching for a mystic paradise
Known only as
Serenity~
Didn't know quite what category to put this one in
Thanks for all the comments on my last posts
As always your views and comments are appreciated:)
Comments (23)
A very sensual way to serenity, indeed. Gorgeous and lush writing. :o) CC
Very moving words, Excellently written and expressed. Well done my friend. BRAVOS!!!
sounds like a dip in the sea... beautifully written :]
He, he..."romantic" category! Wonderful, my dear Susan! I love your poem! Excellent:))!!!
Well, at last I've met someone else who gains serenity/peace through sensuality/erotica and not necessarily through sexual contact! Brilliant!
Beautiful and romantic words..Marvelous poem!!
WOW! what a nice words I wish I could write such beautiful words like you, wonderful work Susan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
could be one for titanic , cool poem, nope hubby lived to see another day hehe cuz red sox were on last nite! david ortiz is my man! :)
I absolutely love this line: "Exotic shades of terror and Exhilaration..."
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Most guys think foreplay is a golf foursome. WINK. You write wonderful stuff. V o t e.
Well, my dear I think you picked the perfect catagory for this one, because you set an excellent atmosphere for serenity, and where better to find it but inside the soothing thoughts of liquidity.
nice wording and imagery :)
wonderful so feeling
Lovely flow of words Susan! Bravo!
such beautiful lyrics!!! i surrender to serenity. thank you! vote!
Very romantic and sensual words, Susan ! I really love the way you write all your poems... you are a very talented writer !!
"Suddenly my essence takes flight, serching for a mystic paradise, known only as serenity." A powerfully emotional ending to a beautiful peace. I very much look forward to more of your work :)
Wow. This kind of reminds me of someone walking into the sea to drown. That would be a kind of serenity, wouldn't it... lonely and peaceful at the same time. It almost wraps around me.
Ha,ha,ha,ha.. Sorry, not laughing at you.. but at avalonfaayre above. I was thinking the same thing while reading your poem, kinda sad and suicidal. Fine line between serenity and despair sometimes. I won't need a shower for this one, in fact, now I'm afraid of the water.. hehe. Really excellent poem Susan!!! Especially your last line! Love it! Just love it!!!! Dave :^)
Very nice, it does have a very serene mood, 'suddenly my essence takes flight' does indeed suggest as others have stated a finality of some sort, but it is a very calming piece, thanks for sharing
Very very nice, and you have such a way to make your words so very touching. :o) Have a beautiful day.
very nice, sounds like one of thos ethigns that is just so beautiful you can' tbear to lok at it all the time afraid it won't be beautiful to you anymore, but at the same time it's so beautiful you can't keep from staring and admiring, like frozen in place with an inability to do anything but exist in the moment, sincerely captivating