I Would Love To Hold You In My Hand(beta version) by gallimel
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No AI - This artwork was created entirely by hand or with traditional digital tools.
Description
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I'd love to hold you
within my hand,
like a lightening ball,
like the preciousness
you've got
could save me from the
nightmares I fight with
everyday, right from then...
I'd love to hold you,
within my hand,
within my skin...
for all the things you say
When I find you within my dreams,
for all the things you make
that wake me up in thrill...
Oh, I'd love to have you...
here,
standing and facing me,
to never let you go
away,
till within my hand
you could name all
the sweetest thoughts
your challengin soul can paint.
I have no escape,
I'd love to make you mine...
I surely don't know
how could I make you mine...
from your skin I follow
God's scents,
all Devil's tricks
I solve and drain
and that divine dream of love,
I would so love to have
suddenly makes me stone,
and suddenly dusts me away...
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Photoshop7, 2 hours work, from pictures available at my site in "Meli's Camera Art" section,here and here.
The blonde girl in this work is ANNALISA, not me, the "ghost" is MORENA ;) and the dancers are Elli's dance group of Parabita.
The Alpha version you all have seen when I was thinkin Rik was dead is seable too here and it was Photoshop 7, 30 minutes work, from this syndroyd 's image :)
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This 7th poem is a bit different from usual. I wrote it still in 1998, but it was not a poem relate to me in complete way...
it was more an excercise in verses about the discovering of love feelings, with eyes of both genders involved.The feeling of possession and the one of fear the discover brings, along with the shaking and devotion to the obsessive idea of the one you consider your personal godsent.
The Alpha version of the image was actually very liked by me.. but after the turmoil of syndroid's death fake news, I thought he for first will love to see another image under this poem :)
Don't worry dear, you're already star of Poems 13 "Your rage", which I prepared a beta version for already,too.You're a perfect model and I will use you more and more again be sure of it :)
I have used a note of classical mythology that sees the three Parcas holding all the sphere of lightening energy that symbolizes the love feeling in my poem. Just for precising I didn't place them over a classic structure of architecture for nothing ;) and to fullfill your curiosity, in case you were actually interested in that particular.
Enjoy you all! :)
Comments (123)
Welcome back, hon! Lots of symbolism and emotions in this fascinating creation! Wonderful poem! votehugz
Wonderful expression of emotions excellent Meli **
Marvellous composition Meli ... it's a very beautiful picture ... grea idea and great work ... Your work amaze me !!!!
Fantastic work sweet meli wowowo I belive you are one of the best artist your image give emotion compliments kisses Orietta :-)
Excellent composition and colors again Mel.. you are fantastic!
Enchanting and romantic your talent is love !
Very strong spatial sense and psychological impact. I like the way the darness enfolds and almost engulfs, but for the bright hues piercing it. Like it a lot!
Excellent work!! Bravo!!
Very lovey and enlightening! I love the concept! Brilliant work! :)
This all just gells together beautifully Bravo dear!!
Impressive - the poster and the poem together, and separately too! You've succeeded so well with the colors and strong atmosphere! I really love the last verses "suddenly makes me stone, and suddenly dusts me away..." There is something really wise, in its contaversativy. Congrats, Meli! And thanks for sharing :-D
I really love your art in all ways! The poem is fascinating and the accompanied picture is fantastic. Keep 'm coming, Meli! You already have an admirer ;-)
Your work is beautiful and sooo compelling!!! Fantastic Composition!!!
very strong image and words...excellent work! (and good to have you back!!)
Fantastic artwork Meli! Excellent!!
You are such an outstanding artist and writer .Very beautiful work .Big Hug {{{{{{{You are always such an insperation to me .Thank you :)
A huge applause !! Wonderful work !!!
Bentornata stellina!!! Son contenta tu sia tornata in questo mondo dove pur trovandomici troppo spesso non mi sento a mio agio! Sei troppo profonda (il che sembrerebbe assurdo, esser profondi dovrebbe in realtessere bello) per questo mondo; troppo profonda per non soffrire, e questo mi spiace. La tua creazione che vedo ora e le tue parole ne sono una rappesentazione. Hai fatto una cosa sin troppo profonda, che parla da s e non ti sei sprecata un attimo nella banalit come se fossi fortemente concentrata nell'amore di ciche costruivi. Colpisce la terza immagine femminile paragonata alle altre. Bellissima... direi quasi quanto te ;)))
That was a great deal of work, of heart and hand.
a wonderful atmosphere and mood on this collage artwork.a true artwork,Meli. #:O)
Delightful and powerful work, Meli! Wonderfully done.
A composition very well executed and excellent concept. Congratulations Meli !
Wow... what an imagination! Love it!!
Beautiful artwork!!,Very touching and lovely!!
Beautiful work and poem,excellent done!!!:o)v
Your work is always fantastic: Both images and words. You are the best, Meli. Hugs ~ Sue
my love this is awesom! definitely one of your best works yet: i love your textire. Well done hug your words touch me
What can I say that has not already been said! You always find a new way to touch my soul...
It reminds me of the painting of the Angel that hangs here. You did the same sort of inspiration in your hands symbolism..with different symbols though. :) Light and love are always connected...itss' a wonderful piece you have made here. Poem suits it perfectly too of course. :)
This one is deep it goes straight into the soul. Congrats!