~~ Drops of Love~~ by Blush
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She moves about the garden
Like a feather in the wind
Borne by a gentle breeze
Admiring her kin~
Drops of love fall from her eyes
And despair fills her heart
For she know what they do not
The time has come to part~
All her life she has sustained them
Giving birth to everyone
Each petal mirrored perfection
And radiance from the sun~
With mission here now found complete
The heavens open wide
Overcome...she breathes one last breath
Eternally abide~
Awakened by the warmth of morn
Their loss is felt with sorrow
Glistening now the drops she shed
Comforting memories for the morrow~
Comments (27)
A very touching poem and lovely image. Your words always paint such a poignant picture. "Drops of love fall from her eyes". Lovely work. :o) CC
Eloquent words Susan... letting go is so hard... that's what I get from this... permanence is of another world I suppose... :]
Wonderful poem, my dear! Excellent done V!!!
A truly felt poem. Wonderful words.
beautiful words that touch my heart.
Superb written work! .... VOTE
There is a tenderness which suffuses the whole poem which lifts and enlivens the general air of melancholy and gives it beauty. I admire the quiet dignity in the acceptance of that which we cannot change ... it is not a surrender, but an embrace. V
The writing, the scene, wonderful combination. Vote!
This struck me so hard... It's like I'd read it before I'd finished the half-way point. The fifth verse is superb. Thank you.
Such a touching and loving poem Susan. I guees that once a mother's job is done and it is time to go there is left a sweetness and a sorrow. Beautifully written!
Moving poem and lovely supporting image! Bravo Susan!
Extremely well written, and full of emotion. I just adore you poetry. "HUGZ" to you Susan BRAVOS!!!
Susan, Wow by far your best yet, and the stunning image to go with it. Your words are so touching, and you write them with the skill of a Master, i am so moved my dear friend everytime I read your works, Susan thank you for sharing..Hugs John
Very tender and touching...you have an EXCELLENT WAY withe WORDS!!!! EXCELLENT!!!
so delicate and full of emotion ...truly :*o)
Wonderful poem! So warm and so very well written. This is truly a heart felt piece. Excellent work.
very touching words...I like your poetry very much...words are very important...a poet can use them in the right way..I am a poet too, so I know how I must reach people in their hearts.....but sometimes words are painful too....it depends how you read it..... and in which mood you are...
very touching... i feel it deeply... beautifuly written susan :]
always love your poetry sweetie..and i so look forward to the eternity part..tired of all this hell...L:0)
your words are always beautiful. well done
Your poems are always very touching ... you have a wonderful way with words, Susan... I just love this one !!!
Beautiful and touching poetry Sue love this!!
wonderfull a rose by any other name would not smell as sweet
beautiful poetry!!:-)))
Perfect picture for a picture perfect verse.
Enchanting image Susan and your verse is soo wonderful. Beautiful work. Hugs.
beautiful work~