~~ A Summers Night~~ by Blush
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Melancholy wafts o'er the hills
This quiet summer night
I listen to a whippoorwill
Warble of its lonely plight~
Still,still, now the countryside
Oak trees etch a silhouette
Of blackest jet
Which seems to guide
The moonlight down~
Soon again, the sad notes trill
And soar aloft on gentle breezes
To distant hills, which are still
But, faint now, a call returns and teases~
From the trees, I see a fleeting thing
Swift! Whippoorwill, Swift! Think I
Darting to a new found friend a-wing
Lonely no more
I bid goodbye~
Whew this took a lot out of me:) A special thanks to everyone for the prayers and get well wishes I am so glad to be a part of RR and to have made all the wonderful friends I have here...you all mean a lot to me you just don't know...I am still awfully weak and my R lung just doesn't want to stop hurting, thank you for the prayers and thank you for reading my poem and just being there for me
You all are wonderful and I luv ya:)
Susan aka Blush~
Comments (33)
Great poem, and greater words of wisdom. Hurry up and get better please. We at rosity are with you.
wonderful poem.....I am a poet too...and get well soon.....
love your poem of hope...prayers for you, sheila
Wonderful poem! Best wishes! V!!!
Your writing is such that I have no problem closing my eyes and seeing just what you speak of, the whole scene comes to life in my mind, Susan you are fantastic my friend, Here's hopeing you continue to get well dear, hugs and a Vote.....John
Beautifully atmospheric poem ... so easy to visualise. A poem to read again - and this second time pause awhile and ponder. Take care, Susan.
I could see and hear your poem, the discription was so well writen! Beautiful sight! I did not know you were ill hon, my prayers are with you now! Take care of yourself! Huge hug!
Exquisite poem and clearly demonstrates why you are my Favorite poet! Sorry your still having pain, I will continue to keep you in my prayers for a full recovery! Bravo & Hugs!
Wonderful poem and gives the feeling of a summer night, while reading it. It really sets the mood and your words are so visual. Excellent work.
Susan, your health may still be weak but your talent is stronger than ever. Such a meloncoly poem, but filled with beauty and even hope. Keep creating, breathe life into your feelings, and heal. :Vote. :o) CC
you've created a lovely nighttime mood, one i take often out on my balcony staring into the night & listening to the birds... glad you're doing a bit better, such a sweet one you are... hugz & muuuuuuah! :]
this is just beautiful susan..im sure it did..but im sure like me when ya post it makes ya feel good inside that at least im contributing somehow in touching others...hope ur pain stops soon will contniue to keep ya in my prayers...although uve been ill..uve touched my soul and i consider ya an "Angel"...hugs love and God Bless sweetie...Laura:0)))))
Wow ! This is so beautiful Susan and I know it healed a part of me.I was there and your poetry is just a joy,you need to be be heard by many!!Thank-you again for this blessing and do know you are in my healing prayers:)
I absolutely love this one.. it says so much about your love for nature..you see the special things there.. Love you hon.. God Bless you.
your words are always balm to my spirit my friend: nicely done
As always your poetry is music to my ears, you have a rare gift that shows and these poems will stand the test of time.. Get em published if they are not allready!!
wonderfull and big gental hugs for you get thee well my fine friend for the summer weeps that you can not be near
Just plain good! .... get well!
I love your words very much!I must say thanks for your comment in my galerie also I am very late because I have no connection from home.I will check more your poem and your gal soon.:):)
Very beautiful and touching Susan! This is a great place for those in pain (I know!). Dave :^>
I clicke don your name in my little gallery :) What a beautiful writing you have here. I write poetry too but have very few up anywhere. Glad you stopped by mine so I could stop by yours :) Keep writing It is lovely prose :)
A very simple yet deep poem. Love it Susan. :O))
Ah, beautiful! I missed this one because we were on vacation. Excellent poem, dear Susan.
I hope you feel better now.. Your words capture a favrite moment that only comes during my favorite time of year... Comes too slowly, leaves too quick. And yes those inky-dark trees do attract and soak up moonlight.
A very lovely poem with beautiful turns of phrase. Stunning work!
This is a so wonderful little poem, exquisitely written - as far as I can estimate. I hope you are healthy now.
Your words move me. Thank you for that:)
hope you are well soon, god bless! ann :)
Yes, I think we are from the same part of the country.
Wonderful, just wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!