A Summers Night by Blush

Writers • Landscape • posted on May 21, 2004

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Melancholy wafts o'er the hills This quiet summer night I listen to a whippoorwill Warble of its lonely plight~ Still,still, now the countryside Oak trees etch a silhouette Of blackest jet Which seems to guide The moonlight down~ Soon again, the sad notes trill And soar aloft on gentle breezes To distant hills, which are still But, faint now, a call returns and teases~ From the trees, I see a fleeting thing Swift! Whippoorwill, Swift! Think I Darting to a new found friend a-wing Lonely no more I bid goodbye~ Whew this took a lot out of me:) A special thanks to everyone for the prayers and get well wishes I am so glad to be a part of RR and to have made all the wonderful friends I have here...you all mean a lot to me you just don't know...I am still awfully weak and my R lung just doesn't want to stop hurting, thank you for the prayers and thank you for reading my poem and just being there for me You all are wonderful and I luv ya:) Susan aka Blush~

Comments (33)

RobertTheoret

1:25AM | Fri, 21 May 2004

Great poem, and greater words of wisdom. Hurry up and get better please. We at rosity are with you.

vlaaitje

1:41AM | Fri, 21 May 2004

wonderful poem.....I am a poet too...and get well soon.....

sheilakalajdzic

3:41AM | Fri, 21 May 2004

love your poem of hope...prayers for you, sheila

vjerana

3:47AM | Fri, 21 May 2004

Wonderful poem! Best wishes! V!!!

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qmont

4:44AM | Fri, 21 May 2004

Your writing is such that I have no problem closing my eyes and seeing just what you speak of, the whole scene comes to life in my mind, Susan you are fantastic my friend, Here's hopeing you continue to get well dear, hugs and a Vote.....John

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meico

6:53AM | Fri, 21 May 2004

Beautifully atmospheric poem ... so easy to visualise. A poem to read again - and this second time pause awhile and ponder. Take care, Susan.

wildfire2003

8:54AM | Fri, 21 May 2004

I could see and hear your poem, the discription was so well writen! Beautiful sight! I did not know you were ill hon, my prayers are with you now! Take care of yourself! Huge hug!

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DennisReed

11:01AM | Fri, 21 May 2004

Exquisite poem and clearly demonstrates why you are my Favorite poet! Sorry your still having pain, I will continue to keep you in my prayers for a full recovery! Bravo & Hugs!

pscott

11:51AM | Fri, 21 May 2004

Wonderful poem and gives the feeling of a summer night, while reading it. It really sets the mood and your words are so visual. Excellent work.

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romanceworks

6:39PM | Fri, 21 May 2004

Susan, your health may still be weak but your talent is stronger than ever. Such a meloncoly poem, but filled with beauty and even hope. Keep creating, breathe life into your feelings, and heal. :Vote. :o) CC

cynlee

8:14PM | Fri, 21 May 2004

you've created a lovely nighttime mood, one i take often out on my balcony staring into the night & listening to the birds... glad you're doing a bit better, such a sweet one you are... hugz & muuuuuuah! :]

Jalen

6:10AM | Sun, 23 May 2004

this is just beautiful susan..im sure it did..but im sure like me when ya post it makes ya feel good inside that at least im contributing somehow in touching others...hope ur pain stops soon will contniue to keep ya in my prayers...although uve been ill..uve touched my soul and i consider ya an "Angel"...hugs love and God Bless sweetie...Laura:0)))))

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highcrow

9:48AM | Sun, 23 May 2004

Wow ! This is so beautiful Susan and I know it healed a part of me.I was there and your poetry is just a joy,you need to be be heard by many!!Thank-you again for this blessing and do know you are in my healing prayers:)

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Elfenone

4:19PM | Mon, 24 May 2004

I absolutely love this one.. it says so much about your love for nature..you see the special things there.. Love you hon.. God Bless you.

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Shadane

12:29AM | Tue, 25 May 2004

your words are always balm to my spirit my friend: nicely done

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danob

11:17AM | Tue, 25 May 2004

As always your poetry is music to my ears, you have a rare gift that shows and these poems will stand the test of time.. Get em published if they are not allready!!

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ObsidianLogic

1:09PM | Wed, 26 May 2004

wonderfull and big gental hugs for you get thee well my fine friend for the summer weeps that you can not be near

roadrunner69

3:55PM | Wed, 26 May 2004

Just plain good! .... get well!

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Mel3d

2:05PM | Sat, 29 May 2004

I love your words very much!I must say thanks for your comment in my galerie also I am very late because I have no connection from home.I will check more your poem and your gal soon.:):)

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davidoblad

5:35PM | Mon, 31 May 2004

Very beautiful and touching Susan! This is a great place for those in pain (I know!). Dave :^>

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Hyria

7:30PM | Wed, 02 June 2004

I clicke don your name in my little gallery :) What a beautiful writing you have here. I write poetry too but have very few up anywhere. Glad you stopped by mine so I could stop by yours :) Keep writing It is lovely prose :)

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SNAKEY

7:20AM | Sun, 06 June 2004

A very simple yet deep poem. Love it Susan. :O))

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Syncopate

10:20PM | Sun, 06 June 2004

Ah, beautiful! I missed this one because we were on vacation. Excellent poem, dear Susan.

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Bothellite

12:05AM | Mon, 07 June 2004

I hope you feel better now.. Your words capture a favrite moment that only comes during my favorite time of year... Comes too slowly, leaves too quick. And yes those inky-dark trees do attract and soak up moonlight.

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