~~Ecstacy's Dance~~ by Blush
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Description
At night I lay as senusal thoughts surround me
where moonlight plays
and magic gathers round me
enchanting me...
Setting me free
As I slowly drift away
with thoughts of sinful pleasure
wild,wondrous, wicked wants
all locked up in this blissful treasure~
My mind wanders
a lust,I wish to fufill
Wants and needs I can't control
I wait for you...
Burn for you
With all my heart and soul~
Enchanted
Wanton ways...
Unable to resist
these passions rising
In my pounding heart~
To the floor we both did fall
in desire's sweet embrace
We kissed and held each other
Our hearts began to race~
Nights velvet cloak
surrounds us...
and darkness cast its spell
we kissed and held each other
In passions endless well~
We forgot all about time
reality forgotten
As our bodies danced
with fever and wanton abandonment~
Pure magic
Embraced in Ecstasy
Desire raged our souls
flamed with love~
We lay drenched
Our passions now sated
as we finished
the dance of Ecstasy
in loves embrace~
Comments (27)
Oh my! Yes, magically putting the reader in the mood. And do you know that you can read it in reverse? Back and forth. Tantalizing.
Thanks! It is a magic poem...Excellent, my dear!!!V!
Beautifully written.. I love your use of language and your simplicity. It's a breath of fresh air to see something so beautifully woven with the simplest of threads. Bravo.
Beautiful and passionate. Excellent Job!
very nicely done....looking forward to seeing more ur work...one can be swept by the moment
You weave a romantic, seductive, passionate spell in your lovers web of desires. Beautiful. :o) CC
the ties that bind us together are the bonds of sisters: hug you are getting better and better at the mastery of words my friend
Susan, this is the best yet, just fantastic words, in a very sensuous and mind enhancing trip through a very special meeting between two people........Execellent Job...........John
I agree with bothe (( only you would of bothered reading it boath ways Tom...whitch of course made me try it!! )) it is a wonderful turn of phrase . been there ::nodnod::
got my passion reved up :D... beautiful woven words... cool... it does work... reading it backwards... great work dear one :]
Oh Susan, this is a magnificent poem... You have a big mastery of the writing, I admire you because it is something which I don't know how to make :) Bravo Susan !
Now thats what I call passionate prose!!
WOW that is very cool :)
You are a gifted poet,this is a truely great poem
Very sensual piece - romance & passion perfectly described in verse.
Poetry with passion! So moving, I'm even sweating! Bravo!
Beautiful passionat words !!!
Superb poem! .... Now, can you write one titled 'Cold Shower?' .... wink!
wow ..again i immed was drawn in by your first sentence..as I became the woman in this dance ..why it hurts so much is cause i first felt that with Mike..my ex fiance and best friend...in my heart he will always be my soulmate..we first met on here and he was in another country...thruogh life obstacles we finely met face to face and the love was even deeoer..unfort life stole him from me yet again ..in a way we will never be husband and wife..but Im thankfeul abd gr8t ful for his committment to care for me...God Bless..Laura:((((
Excellent poem Susan. Very, very talented. (I checked your homepage, Your cute too (blush,blush). I'll keep tabs on your art. :^>
A lovely lyrical piece of restrained eroticism - sensual, but very subtle.
Very passionate poem...from the heart no doubt!!! :)
Being a foreign language for me I was a afraid of your poetry. But I accidently started with this one and - I must be a stone if I'd stay cool after reading this overwhelming passion!
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Hidden fire ! This was very full of passion. Very good.
Ur poem so beautifully written also reveals so much. The blissful satiation in the end is a lovely ripple in the memory but the journey began wth the struggle between, what u dont want to do and yet want to do. Thanx, for ur honesty and expression.
Whoah! I remember this, too. I was in love a couple of times. Thanks for the memory!
Susan you are so talented Sweety and this one is so beautifully written and moving. I read it through twice and will come back to do so again. What a wonderful first post in the gallery.