BROKEN CADET by CoolDimension
Stormrider75 12:56AM | Tue, 14 June 2022
Hi, great render and storytelling :) Your style is awesome!
Saby55 3:07AM | Tue, 14 June 2022
Absolutely well done my friend, one more fantastic than the other !!!!👍🙋♂️
uncollared Online Now! 7:10AM | Tue, 14 June 2022
Great posing and expression. Fine looking characters
APlusDesign 10:42AM | Tue, 14 June 2022
Whoa what a twist! Wonder if he's being honest or if he just plans on driving Avery crazy! XD
CoolDimension 8:03PM | Tue, 14 June 2022
Thank you for commenting! I hope it will surprise you! Thanks for reading the story! I appreciate it!
Radar_rad-dude 1:57PM | Tue, 14 June 2022
I don't think this Van character is for real! He is putting on too much of an act! He certainly has something devious up his sleeve! Watch out, Avery! Guard your back! Excellent art work on these characters! Many fine praises from me!
CoolDimension 8:04PM | Tue, 14 June 2022
Thank you for all your kind words and reading my story, Radar! i appreciate it!
madame 3:42AM | Wed, 15 June 2022
Wonderful expressive characters... great posing and rendering work !!
dochtersions 12:10PM | Wed, 15 June 2022
This is so superb made, in many ways, my friend. I love the use of colors and textures, and how great they are coming out against the fantastic background. I'm so sorry I can't read your story because of my painful eyes, I'm convinced that I miss something interesting now.
CoolDimension 7:02PM | Wed, 15 June 2022
I really appreciate the kind comments! I very much appreciate your viewing and commenting!
CoolDimension 12:40AM | Fri, 17 June 2022
Thank you so much, Richard! I appreciate your kind remarks!
enigma-man 6:05PM | Fri, 17 June 2022
The illustration matches the situation with Van and Avery perfectly.
CoolDimension 9:06PM | Fri, 17 June 2022
Thank you so much, enigma-man! I appreciate your kind comment!
CoolDimension 11:44PM | Sat, 18 June 2022
Thank you so much, daggerwilldo! That really means a lot to me! I really appreciate the kind comments!
RodS 7:17PM | Sun, 03 July 2022
Excellent artwork and a very compelling story! Wow - I thought my dad was tough at times (he was a 20-year military man), but Van's dad sounds like he has serious issues...
Great job on this!
CoolDimension 11:48PM | Sun, 03 July 2022
Thank you so very much, Rod! I appreciate it very much! I hope to tell the story of why Van is so freaked out. His Dad will visit soon and it will become a lot clearer why he is so driven to succedd and please his Father!
perpetualrevision 6:56PM | Sat, 09 July 2022
Poor Van. Sounds like his relationship with his father is rather toxic and the opposite of what a healthy parent-child relationship should be. I'm not sure I want to meet Dad!! It must cost Van a lot to humble himself like this, but I hope he can find a way towards recognizing the ways in which they're equals, though with different strengths and weaknesses. Life doesn't always have to be about ranking others above or below you!
Great job with the expressions!