RR# 306a - Rhea - Kinney's Sensei redux by Faemike55
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A few of you commented and provided constructive criticism on the original image. After looking very hard at it. I concur and agree with the comments. This is a rework of the original with minor modifications. Thank you for your comments.
Have a great day
I'm feeling much better now thank you......;-}
and yes Critical Comments are welcome, as long as they are constructive
Comments (18)
Really good job in posing her in the heavy grass. The render I like, makes the trees stand out.
a fun character Mike and a superb pose. I noticed you added some red on her clothing and the scene is a little darker which works so well
I think this is a fine image, Mike! A great looking pose and a fine looking character. This is a fine setting as well for this scene. It all goes very nicely together. Well done, Mike!
OK - she looks like she's enjoying this waaaay too much! And whoever is going to wind up on the receiving end of her glee is probably going to regret their trespass, methinks... They shouldn't have thrown that beer can into the bushes instead of taking it to the nearest trash can.. And if Kinnie was her Padawan, it wouldn't be wise to upset her, either!
Looks really great, Mike. The knives stand out much better, and you also did great with the lighting.
The fact that she is under a canopy of tree branches explains the lack of any strong shadows and actually works really well. I have to agree with Rod, if I saw an elf coming at me with two huge knives and that smile I would be running away from her as fast as I could.
Delightful pose and great place for a romp in the forest!!!
Looks pretty cool again ther is shadow in the bushes at the rear of the scene showing there is a light source and direction what you need is some shadow in the forground to match those at the rear and it would be perfect Mike! the contents great again just the shadows my friend!
Excellent work hon! Love her expression! xxx
This one I think it looks very improve from the original. But I think the left arm needs more work on the pose. The way she it's grabbing the knife that I'm not sure I can describe it in English. Let me try. Looks like force. Maybe the arm a little down and the forearm bit to the front. One trick it is when you going to do a pose like that place your own arm, hand like it you were the one who is grabbing the knife. That would be more easy then you see if the pose it's natural. I hope you don't get mad it's only my opinion.
Had a look at your previous version...both are nice renders, though this one sets her off better and the addition of the red scarf is a nice touch...really fine action pose you've used.
Nice work
Wonderful action scene my friend seems everyone has given you advice so I will keep quiet on this one otherwise you will start to get confused my only advice when posing think how you would hold the knife and how high your arm would be, Would your elbow stick out like or would it be down more towards the body and slightly behind her?
Bravo! That's very beautiful! Excellent!
Beautiful image !
Looks excellent to me.
Looking good!
A fun image full of life. I don't know what the other one looked like, but this conveys the mood nicely I think.
Sieht toll aus Mike, das gibt es nix zu meckern!!!!