Girls From T.N.A: Breitlenger Jar: Ch 5, Pg 5 by RodS
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Here's page 5 as the Girls continue their investigation in Washington DC. Hope you enjoy this latest as we continue.
I've got some more writing to do - as my hyperactive muse continues to come up with ideas.... This chapter will soon break into 2 more story lines, and that will happen pretty soon. I'm working and re-writing to make the separate story lines all make sense, and add to the story as a whole. Writing and putting this together has turned into quite an adventure in and of itself! After Chapter 1 it took on a life of its own, and I've enjoyed every bit of it - as I hope all of you do. Much more to come!
For those of you new to the story, all the previous chapters - and an explanation of the Breitlenger Jar - are available at the Girls From T.N.A. website.
Thanks so much for dropping by, and for all your wonderful comments and support!
Comments (33)
Razor42
Very nice work Rod!
magnus073
Rod, you did an outstanding job on both the story and character interaction here. However I do feel a bit sorry for the girls, because if they are going after corrupt, sex offender senators that could become a full time job.
RodS
Call it job security! LOL
Diemamker
Great page!... it seem that slickie is up to no good... more for when the girls get their hands on him!... these image just came out awesome!... the reflection on the car are killer. man now I can't wait to see what's next!.. I have to admit that this story just keeps getting better!... I keep going over the other chapters... I just hope my story is this good when it comes out... well that is if.. Great work on this, and keep-um coming... still the party to come.
auntietk
I'm glad the kid wasn't working for the mob or something. Good plot twist! And of course your panels are superb. Always. Nicely done!
Daddywolf
I sure like the way your comic strip pages look and keeping it under the size limit , Bravo do you use a template is it in the resolution because it look great even @full screen
mikeerson
hahahahahaha.... You created a soap opera that now controls you hahahahaha.... lol..... been there, done that.... BONDAGE was quite something when I was creating it... I couldn't create as fast as the story was developing. I created Book1 A thru Z and then Book II A thru Z....before I was halfway through Book II I was already writing book 5.... and then something happened COMPUTER PROBLEM - LOL .... wait til you look back on your stuff and say who was this? what did I name them - lol... that's when you know you're in trouble - lol
MineFujiko
Beautful render as always,RodS-san!
vitachick
I like the second frame the best...Reflections off the car...Awesome job! Hope the Senator gets what he deserves... Another great chapter...!!! Of course your graphics are +10
GrandmaT
Fantastic work! All the sets look marvelous and I have to agree, that car is SHINY. I am looking forward to the Girls taking Slickie down.
eekdog Online Now!
no matter what direction you go with the story, Rod. i know it will be super as it always has been. great story line and mega details in each segment. love the car refelction alot. i still think she's hiding something. well done my friend, best zoomed..
FaeMoon
Great episode for the TNA girls. I really feel for Kayla and Layla, but we know that the girls will have that Slick Senator in his place soon, hopefully behind bars!
Cyve
Fantastic scene and poses... Outstanding work my friend !
mrestey
Awesome continuation Rod. Good to see the girls got to Kayla before Slicky did. I'm sitting at a "McBurger" place right now checking my email on their open WiFi, LOL. I am WAY behind on comments but I can't take the chance of looking at everybody's upload right now, LOL. One never knows what might pop up. ;-)
adorety
Excellent page Rod. So we learn more of the deviant ways of Slickie. A true slimebag if there ever was. Great details in the illustrated segments and I really appreciate those tight catsuits the girls wear ;) Funny how stories seem to grow and write themselves. Looking forward to more. And I'm really curious as to what the Alien Stooges are up to. Woob Woob.
RodS
"And I'm really curious as to what the Alien Stooges are up to. Woob Woob." Oh, you shall see, you shall see...... nyuk, nyuk... ;-D
T.Rex
Oh, boy! Another great story in the making! Any chance of a pig or two getting a nose stove in? That STILL has me up in stitches! Keep up the good work! :-)
RodS
Hehe - I think there may be a good possibility of another encounter... LOL
drifterlee
You really do excellent work, Rod! Your comics are incredible!!
mickeyrony
Hummm........ Very intensive moment and always the best from you Rod Great art again ((5++))
MagikUnicorn
super cool love it
Xfitz
Good stuff.
synthetik3
sounds like someone is gonna have their day ruined by a couple of hotties. great chapter update
Richardphotos
I like all of the ladies but the one with the brown clothing looks like she was poured into her clothes. very sensual work and storyline
RodS
Yes, G4 does fill out that Police Uniform quite nicely..... Hubba hubba.....
jocko500
very good story . I going to go back in your gallery and get caught up
debbielove
Another top episode mate, full of plot.. I hope this Senator (slash Politician) gets his.. They ALL deserve to.. Great detail well done mate! Rob
Egzariuf
Senator Slickie,,,,, you crack me up
oddment
Great scenes and story-line.
bazza
Excellent scenes and work on this story mate.. Top job as always... As Always best in full size!! Keep them coming my friend!! Love it!!
Faemike55
Outstanding work on this page! yes! G4 looks fabulous in that skin suit! any tighter and we'd be able to...... can't wait to see what's next
Nonsolum
I wonder who clean the car cause the reflections are so, so well effective ! Thanks for the site link also Rod : it's a good way to remember or to follow the storyline as well...
renecyberdoc
i see someone has to bring this MoFo Slickie down.i can send over some support troops if need be. meanwhile we have a meeting tonight at the highest level on Spackoine.President Abra Kadabra will outline his agenda to to the council. They want to fight some group by the name of G-had od Djeehead or whatever head (lol) i dont really have much intel on that . One of their ambassadors got decapitated in the wastelands and we have to send a strong message. The president will seek Spackovian support of course,lets see what deal we can squeeze out of that Voka. we will keep you posted on this. your works is inspiring me my friend,its good to be back.
RodS
"President Abra Kadabra.......G-had od Djeehead" LOLOLOL!!! OMG, it's good to have you back in the fold, Doc!
brewgirlca
What's not to like here? I love, love, love those shades, especially on G4 in panel 1. Really excellent reflections off the car in panel 2. Agree that G4 really fills out her uniforms, especially again in panel 2 where she shows some hard earned glutes. Wonder how Ar keeps her figure with those cream puff takeouts. Agree with T that another makin bacon fight would be great. That was a pinacle episode for those of us who love campy violence.
RodS
LOL - Well, you and Rex will be happy to know I'm figuring out how to work another bacon bout into the story! I've had a couple really fun suggestions for another encounter with the pigs that I'll incorporate. Which brings up a point - I'm always open to ideas for things you'd like to see. This is your story, my friends, as much as it is mine. I've had a few great ideas suggested that I'll work in at some point. However, I will not be held responsible if you suggest another naked hoverbike flight, which may well prompt the Girls to pay you a nocturnal visit and throw you in a swamp somewhere! LOL!