What I want by Wolfenshire
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Special Notes: I guess since the contest is over now it's okay to pull this over to my gallery. I want to thank everyone that voted for this piece, it won first place in the Holiday Contest, writers category, and that was very cool. Thanks everyone, and thanks to everyone that entered. Everyone wins when you share your talent and I loved all the stories that were entered.
What I want.
The house is strung with garland
A wreath is on the door
A candle in the window
A tree sparkling with lights
This is not what I want
Outside with my friends
Sleds down the hill
Snowflakes on our tongues
Sliding on the ice
This is not what I want
Hot Chocolate and Cookies
Candy Canes and gingerbread
Up the stairs they send me
To wait and pretend
This is not what I want
At the table they sit
Wrap this, wrap that
Ribbons and tape
This is not what I want
Not what I want at all
To my room I go
Presents from Christmas past
Broken under my bed
Set my pen to paper
And write the letter
Honey, you can come down now
Mom, I need an envelope
I fold the letter
And mark it, Santa, Urgent
Above the fireplace I put it
And off to bed I go
My eyes open
Did Santa get my letter?
I will soon know
Down the stairs I fly
The tree is bare
Not a light is strung
Not a tinsel is hung
Under the tree is empty
This is what I want
Dad holds the letter
To them I run
And hug them tight
It is perfect
This is what I want
Dear Santa
Ten Christmas’ I have known
Qinisao, my pen pal, not one
Give him my Christmas
This is what I want
Bobby
Comments (11)
WELL DONE, l can see why it won. X
Congrats on the win, it is a special work!
This is Magnificent! A well written and very thoughtful piece. I wholeheartedly agree with their choice of first place. Congratulations!!
I really did expect it to be winner of first place even though the other entries were remarkable and well done! What an amazing story of sharing! Congratulations!
Well done
Congratulations! Well written and thought provoking. Thanks. Rick
Thought and tear provoking writing I can see why it won first place Congratulations
Well written. Congratulations! :)
A wonderful, heartwarming story in poem form! Well done, and yes, I can see why it won, it certainly deserved it.
Adorable poem my friend, marvelous work, congratulations on the win, you deserved without doubt!
wonderful stuff here