Surfers by beachzz
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No AI - This artwork was created entirely by hand or with traditional digital tools.
Description
Surfers
Gliding
Sweeping
Floating
Across the water
Riding
Paddling
Splashing
Into the sea
Kicking
Pulling
Pushing
Towards the wave
Standing
Leaning
Moving
To the crest
Catching
Sliding
Flying
Rushing
Speeding
Thrilling
Soaring
Surfing
7/24/09

Comments (14)
Image and poem are perfect together!
MMMMMMM....... some of that words would be quite useful... never mind!!!! Excellent poem and matching image dear friend! Bravo!! :)
That was a superb poem and photo. They do go together perfectly..
You sound like you may have surfed in the past. All good words that convey not only meaning but feeling. Super.
A perfect pair!
Lets go surfin now Everybodys learning how Come on and safari with me Now spend all day singing thatun :) Good job Maz!
You catch and describe the the thrill of the ride nicely my friend :) and beautiful capture too
I like how your poem takes one from beginning to end....well, all except for the 'wipe out.' LOL
Fantastic work!!!I like it!
Stellar, Marilyn. Just reading this has given me all the exercise I need for a month. I'm bound to feel sore and aching in the morning.
wonderful work warm hugs, Linda
sound like you did it. cool poem
lovely written and great photo x
3 quatrains of gerunds (verb & 'ing' in case anyone doesn't remember the horrors of grammar, lol), followed by a line of action, and a final stanza of all gerunds...and it all ends in "surfing". Wonderful & simple & probably what it feels like to be on the waves. I wouldn't know, though at least one person here seems to (bill)---and you, maybe? And another fine visual to match. You probably wrote this with intuition, but formally it's another of your simple pieces of ordered language. Fine work all around!