Misty - The Sky Darkens (repost) by NetWorthy
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I've never done a repost, but it seemed warranted this time. OK, so you guys knew I wasn't too happy with the original, and apparently a few of you agreed with me. Thanks so much for the helpful messages with suggestions on how to improve. I implemented most of them to one degree or another (to the limit of my skill and understanding of D/S LOL). The exception is camera POV, and you will see why in the next scene.
So which one do you guys like best? Go to the PREVIOUS link below to see the original. Let me know!
FIRST CHAPTER -:- NEXT CHAPTER -:- PREVIOUS CHAPTER
Image and story © 2008 Larry Hodge
Comments (14)
Great expressions and mood. Very well done!
I liked the original a lot Larry but this is even better cosidering the changes you made, nice one :)
Actually, I liked both. I have to see that in this re-post. The apprehension is more visible on the faces of the bearded buy in front, and on the other man in the background. Very well done, as usual!
This image has a good sense of drama
The original looked good to me, but this one shows off the lighting a lot better. And their expressions on this one are much better, too.
Good changes in the expressions and lighting! Develops a great sense of anticipation for the next scene!
i like this one better great lighting and expressions...excellent work larry.
Nice work Larry. Your doing great with the expressions!
Great render, Larry. Brilliant work on the expression. Daz Studio is a riddle to me, too. So much to learn.+5 #;oD
Thats great - It communicates to the viewer! Or reader as the case may be.
wonderful
Stunning creation my dear friend...Hugs
You did cool work! EXT!
Not bad!