Girls From T.N.A: Breitlenger Jar: Ch 5, Pg 4 by RodS
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Description
Time to get things back on track! Here's the latest in the Girls' adventures.
I had to do a bit of figuring on how to show the communications on the Girls' laptop screen - I think it came out OK, but you'll probably have to zoom to full size to read it.
Now, I need to get moving at full speed again - it's taken too long to get this page done.
I think the Girls are still upset with me for that pageant thingy... But I've got a surprise for them coming up.. Maybe it'll get me out of Dan's doghouse.... And he'll have a little more room! LOL
Hope everyone had a great weekend, and you all have a great new week ahead!
Thanks so much for all your comments, support, and especially your friendship! It's what keeps me going!
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Comments (30)
Very cool! I think you handled the laptop info just fine picked up straight away and it was non intrusive on the scenes. Fantastic work on this, as always mate :)
it seems that the young lady is just realizing that she has been used.... at least I hope that this is the case. Great page Rod. I hope that the ladies understand what you had to do earlier - that it was to prove a point about a system that bases everything on 'looks' and questionable talent....
Oh, they'll forget all about it once they see the car I just got 'em.... Oops - hope they didn't hear that..... LOL
Very nice cartoon !
The "laptop dialog" was clear as a bell in full view. Of course I look at everything at 125% anyway! LOL! Can't wait to find out what happens with the girl! Teenagers can be pretty unreliable and pretty freakin' convincing! "Oh, I'm innocent! Oh dear me!" I've got six nieces and nephews ... they're all good kids, but at one time or another I think every one of them tried to pull a fast one! :P I love the camera position in panel two. Outstanding!!
Always worth the wait though HotRod - you make these so well and the time it takes is testament to your patience and care you put in to all of this - bravo!
Marvelous scenes and fantastic characters... Outstanding once again !!!
Great story in images and Words, Rod - fine details too. Excellen Work!! :o)
This episode looked like ALOT of work.But with your graphic talent I wouldn't expect less......Let's see what happens next!!
Awesome page!!...I can only wonder where this will lead.. but it should be fun!!! These images came out great! the laptop tex was cool.. can't wait for the next page, so I'll guess I'll just send Trish over to help you with it... she can be very helpful... now to see about my own stories... Hope you had a great weekend... and now the week...ugh!..
So glad to see the series back up and running again, Rod. Great work as always and I can't wait to see the car you got for them.
Wonderful! I agree with magnus073-san. Welcome home RodS-san(^-^)/
"you'll probably have to zoom to full size to read it."? REALLY Rod? Who DOESN'T zoom when viewing your awesome creations? LOL. A cool addition to you story. I was beginning to think that it might be someone in the kitchen or another room that was the hacker and was afraid Ar and G4 were going to make a blunder, LOL. Glad they didn't. ;-) In the first panel when Ar says "I just died and went to heaven" and G4 says "Those look so scrumptious", why does it appear they are looking at the waitress's boobs? LOL!!!!! Just being a smart-ass Rod. ;-) Great work as always buddy!
Why do I get the feeling that they've just nabbed a kid hacking into her sister's FaceBook account, while the bad guy became suspicious and simply closed his lid (leaving the computer on) and walked out before being approached? Nice work You did a really good job with the panels in this.
Looking forward to more of this. This page looks great and was easy to read and follow. I came late to your gallery and Diemamker's so I am a bit confused by the overlap with Ranpha. Of course I just learned Diemamker is Dan and not Ranpha. So I have some serious catching up to do. Good stuff from you both tho. Signed Confused.
Hey, don't feel bad, Fitz.... Getting out of bed in the morning is enough to confuse me..... LOL Dan's lovelies and the T.N.A. gals are always helping each other out... much more fun that way! :-D
love their outfits, the comic great job... before I started to comment, I wondered where's their badge? Gun?... and then the thing that all women carry - their brush - lol.... I bet you thought I was going to say purse, huh? lol
Ah they got her and they got her quick.... what will happen to her :-)
Uh Oh. I'll bet someone is blackmailing here. Curious chapter with more twists and questions. Excellent set of scenes and your agents have a sensitivity only a woman could have. Great work and I look forward to another chapter soon!
Well, its about dang time. I was going to write you an e mail asking what was up with the girls. Lol! ;)
Excellent scenes. I could read the small print if I leaned very close to my screen, Rod, but it's a 27 inch, LOL!
Great work on this page Rod the writing for the computer was easy to read, feeling the young lady may be in the doo doo lol. looking forward to the next page of this marvellous adventure. Keep up the great work..
Excellent work again on your story telling images Rod, love them.
awesome page, Im in awe of how much time and effort you put into your work, love it and ready for more
An Outstanding Image,
(DITO) i agree, Rod. the friendships keep me going my friend. you do some major kick azz work on this series, i see why it takes a bit for the next page in these chapters. she's all acting innocent, but i bet she has somethings to hide. love how them clothes fit on G4.. also enjoy all the details, like the wall arts and monitor screen info. best zoomed.. not sure if your getting all my ebots. i seem to be getting some but not all.
Fantastic story and work my friend!!!!!Bravissimo!V:DDD.Hugsxx Whylma
an exciting scenario and very imaginative. superbly done panels
My question is which agent is she the kid sister of? With that red hair I am guessing Rhampa. That wall art is great. And I think you handled the computer chatter very creatively and it works. Your opening camera angle is really fantastic. It takes in the whole sweep of the scene. Putting the girls in a very power position.
Well, the plot thickens.. (You lost me with Tech stuff though....but I'm thick that way lol) Where will this go? I wonder.. Still, the girls can only be pleased in the end if you've something for them to cheer them up after being ripped off in that 'Comp'... But we won't go there..... Neat job as always mate! Rob
Gorgeous
Awesome images and story line!! Super cool job Rod!