Brother Binx by BlueLotus7
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[Written for my son's black cat, named Binx after the cat in Disney's film, Hocus Pocus]
Brother Binx, Brother Binx
tell me if you please
what is the mystery of the fleas?
Why do they jump and why do they dance?
And why do they live in underpants?
Brother Binx, Brother Binx
tell me if you must
why the little mice play in the dust?
Beneath the bed way under the ruffle
I hear them at night as they scurry and scuffle.
Brother Binx, Brother Binx
please tell me, please do
of the baby birds way up in the chimney flue!
Doesn't the ash make them sneeze?
Wouldn't they be better off in the trees?
Comments (18)
LOL...now this definitely brought a desperately needed smile to my face this morning....you just have such a wonderful way with words!
A very lovable piece of humourous poetry of great charm. I really enjoyed the smile. v
LOL!! Very wonderful words indeed! Excellent!
LOL!! Very cute and humourous!
ah...this is soo sweet and wonderful..i hope ur son enjoyed it.
LOL...I just love this one! It's so fun and cute and humorous. I'll lay odds your son must adore this poem about his cat. Absolutely fantastic!
I laughed while reading this, so funny and a very very good poem, too. v
Actually, he loved it so much that I framed it for his 24th birthday!!! LOL You should have seen the look on his face!! If I can ever figure out how to convert a bmp to a jpg I'll post their picture!! I could start entering under Photography as well...
Excellent work!
Excellent poem! So cheery and really brightened my day. Your son must love this and I just know that for the rest of the night I will be reciting your first line a few times in my head ... so catchy and fun. And such a great flow to this wonderful piece.
This is really sweet, sort of reminiscent of the old nursury rhymes, sort of nonsensicle and fun, but not about getting a beating, as some of the old ones were ;) great job!
A very lyrical and enchanting poem. :o) CC
Reminds me of T.S. Elliot. When you save an image there's a box that gives you foremat options.... just click one of the jpeg options. If there isn't a box open it in a different program. MS Paint can do it, but I think it loses some of the image quality.
LOL!Fantastic :-)))bye calum
Sounds like a 'sequel' is coming? .... wink! .... superb!
I love it! it it's a beautiful poem, innocent and yet it captivates you.
As the cat/ climbed over/ the top of/ the jamcloset/ first the right/ forefoot/ carefully/ then the hind/ stepped down/ into the pit of/ the empty/ flowerpot/ (William Carlos Williams)
O i love this one toooo..... LOL great poem....