~~The House of Souls~~ by Blush
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Description
Smoky hued doors opened
Almost ethereal
Corridors and patterns
Weaved
Right and left~
First there was The Crying Room
many tears
The Crying Room had heard~
The Living Room was next
Irridescent roses
glowed and shimmered
through lacy curtains
and pale moonlight~
Next
was the room
Forgiveness and Sorrow
I shuddered to see their faces
The ones I had wronged
in this life~
Upstairs
Was the Thank You room
happiness
filled my heart
soft light
such a peaceful room~
Then came
The Dark Room
for the things I had done
in my life
that were inexcuseable
sinful~
And now that I have viewed these rooms
I feel inedaquate
and I hope for
A more pleasant journey
the next time
I visit
The House of Souls~
Comments (22)
I wish to know what "House of souls" is about...Is it possible to go there in the meditation? I think - yes! Very nice poem, my dear! Excellent!!!
I think I'll book my permanent stay in the Thank You Room - Thank You :)! A most pleasant reading journey this time! Bravo!
Susan, I think we all pass through many rooms, in our lives journey, hopefuly our stay in the darker rooms will be breif.....anyway your writing has again opened my eyes this morning, and gave me something to chew on today. You ability to write is truly of the finest quality, thanks for the words my friend...............John
Very beautiful work. The "rooms" are just what we all need to visit to give us perspective and to help us grow and better ourselves. Wonderful and touching symbolism Susan, a heartfelt poem. Thank you!
wow so in depth so wonderful so needed THANK YOU
This is truly beautiful Susan.It evokes so much feeling about the inner journey we must experience in life.You have a wonderful gift my dear.The pen is mightier than the sword and you touch many people with your words.Beautiful! V
Excellent writing, and all true. We experience this in life, especially toward the end. Hopefully, there will at least be a balance. Thanks for sharing..
Beautiful poetry ... smooth and captivating. You have said much in few words and I hear a voice that flows. It was a wonderful read.
Wowl Susan, your haunting poem gave me chills.What a special way you hve communicated, for we all have these rooms within us. Beautiful work. and a Vote. :o) CC a
How about a 'writing room'? .... where someone can learn to write as well as you have just done! .... EXCELLENT!
Very simple words and very effective. you are soul stirer......;)
wow I just cant help but feel so inadequate and not sur I should even call myself a poet...maybe just a writer with a message....your innate ability to instantly draw your readers into your vision..excellent Susan..Laura:0))))))
An original approach to the facets of our individuality - what makes us who we are. I felt obliged to examine my own soul architecture after reading this ... which says much more directly how well the poem worked.
It's very hard for some to read between the lines of this poem, but the one's that can, it touches the soul, and has touched mine.
a poem which makes us face our own demons and choices we've made. this one makes us look in the mirror and see some bitter (and some not-so-bitter) truths! This poem is very powerful!
Wonderful and touching Susan. Your talent is obvious...Thanks for sharing.
I came here b'coz of a flower for u by sheilakalajdzic. And after reading ur poem I have no regrets. Wonderful, deep and moving.
Oh what a deep and moving poem I like it very much. You are very talented and have a wonderful gift to put your thoughts into words the way you do Hugs Cathy xooxox
I've been in that house. It's also called 'The House of Inner Truth'
I hope a house with full room of happiness ,and a free happiness room for people
I wanted to check out your first posting and was moved by this beautiful and very thoughtful poem Susan.,
Beautiful rhythm and imagery! This poem takes the reader into his own soul as he travels the rooms of your words. Excellent writing!