#4670: Be sure to tip the bellboy, Miss Finche! by Radar_rad-dude
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Description
It's a short ride from the airport to downtown where there hotel is located. All the
while, Steve's mouth is running non-stop! By the time they reach the hotel, Miss
Finche (and I also suspect Mel, their guide) is ready to put a cork in good ole
Steve's yapper! LOL.
After parking out front, Mel runs inside and gets a bell boy to help with all their
luggage. Of course, Steve will be too busy assisting Mel with the 'finer details'
of registering them correctly, to be bothered with helping unload the Jeep, And don't
you know(?) 'by the way, oh, Miss Finche, don't forget to tip the bell boy!' Good ole
Steve to the rescue. Always thinking of everything.
I think I just saw Miss Finche's finger nails grow an extra inch or two! Even Mel is
rolling her eyes over this one.
After they are satisfied with their rooms, Mel makes a hasty departure. She explains
that she has found a good charter boat for their explorations but needs to make the
final arrangements with the owner.
She leaves them to refine the boat details but promises she will return once she has
sealed the deal with the boat owner. Steve, in a rare moment of thoughtfulness, asks
Mel if she would like to join them for supper upon her return. She accepts.
Thank you for taking a peek! Your support is greatly appreciated!
Comments (18)
JohnnyM 5:28PM | Sun, 15 May 2022
Ocean View Hotel looks like a nice place to visit...I think Miss Finche and Steve will find the accommodations to be to their liking. I hope that now that Mel has been invited to dinner, Steve will not make Miss Finche pick up the tab for the meal. I will wait to see how it goes over dinner, perhaps some details of how they plan to go about the finding whats in the map, will be revealed over dinner. I like your render, but I don't envy that poor bell boy for having to take so many bags of luggage up to their room. With so much luggage, it looks like they will be staying in the Hotel for more than a few days. Doing a great job with your story Bill...its quite interesting and a pleasure to read. :-)
mazzam 6:42PM | Sun, 15 May 2022
Rally fine urban scene. I like the semi tropical motif.
mifdesign Online Now! 7:16PM | Sun, 15 May 2022
Superb scene, it's getting hotter an hotter! The supper would reveal more of their plans and the beautiful view leaves lot room for dreams and adventure. The special growing nail liqueur was so much fun. Brilliant render, excellent job, Bill!
perpetualrevision 10:51PM | Sun, 15 May 2022
I look forward to seeing what Mel's going to come up with as a way to put Steve in his place! Hope he's not going to expect for Ms. Finche to pay for dinner, too? What a jerk! But I'm curious about what they're going to find on the island!
A_Sunbeam 2:28AM | Mon, 16 May 2022
Full of details - great scene!
CoolDimension 5:13AM | Mon, 16 May 2022
Great scene and wonderful prop/place work!
Darkglass 5:20AM | Mon, 16 May 2022
Impressive scene, wonderful details and pov...lovely work in every area..!
MagikUnicorn 7:39AM | Mon, 16 May 2022
Wonderfull
GrandmaT 11:36AM | Mon, 16 May 2022
Great scene! Did they leave anything at home???
RodS 7:58PM | Mon, 16 May 2022
I'm pretty sure Steve didn't hand a couple 20s to Miss Finche for that tip.... LOL
Another great panel and narrative, Bill. It's all coming together nicely!
OmniFX 8:15PM | Mon, 16 May 2022
Very cool scene and Hotel building. Cool autos and great story, Super!
STEVIEUKWONDER Online Now! 5:36AM | Tue, 17 May 2022
Even though my name is taken in vain (lol), I love this scene Bill!
uncollared 8:08AM | Tue, 17 May 2022
Very cool car. Great setting
miwi 4:15PM | Tue, 17 May 2022
Cool street scene,klasse story!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wolfenshire 8:52AM | Wed, 18 May 2022
She has a lot of luggage, better give that bell boy a big tip. Well done writing.
MollyFootman Online Now! 2:00PM | Wed, 18 May 2022
A fun story that I am continuing to enjoy. If I was Miss Finche, Steve would be dead meat. XD Mel certainly adds an interesting slant; what's she up to? =)
Molly
MeInOhio 10:39AM | Thu, 19 May 2022
Good story! Nice POV! I would have liked to see Ms. Finch's expression during this.
donnena 9:49PM | Tue, 24 May 2022
Super fun story and render!!!