Pagetest 2 by Prof_Null
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Okay, here is a page test, as well as being the next part of the story I think I have he layout right now. Also, ( DUH! ) I found the delete button for my gallery so I will be able to repost all the pages in this format or something near. I will need to re-render some pics and add more too, so check back later.
Thanks for watching!
Comments (6)
This is CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, the camera angles are a little boring. Since there's not a lot of action, it's all mainly conversation, zoom in tighter on there faces. Spencer, the guy with the gun, has no "presence" or is he a robot too? I say, go to the comic book store, buy a book and then copy (or mimic) the layout. But definitely keep at it.
Thanks Miles, I really appreciate your comment. Everything here is experimental, I am definitely going to work on the layouts, shots etc. It's more like being a movie director ! (That's not your real name is it? Better watch that Heisenberg Compensator ! :) )
Good story and images. I can only imagine how much time and effort it takes to create 6 panels with several actors in each panel. As Miles said: Definitely keep at it.
This came out very nice,... I think the camera angles are fine... only you might want bring the character in alot closer to the camera so we can see there face expressions.. I think the two lower images came out the best, like his expression.. and what does she have in her hand?... can't wait to see what it is.. Great work!
I like the way the story is going and the six-panel layout. I am happily awaiting the final cut.
I see you finally found the sweet spot on the talk boxes. For the love of goodness, do not delete your gallery. It's far more interesting to see where your work came from.