See former upload in the story here below: http://www.renderosity.com/mod/gallery/index.php?image_id=2328286 (Story continued) Playback!.... Pippin: On screen*!...Here it comes....Hey, they look like humans?... Miwa: They are probably human cyborgs - they are really on a far away journey...maybe the reason why the crew are "modified".... Pippin: So people want to look like their machines...? ----------------------------------------------- Man: ...Something's quite wrong...the third failure in just five days!.. Darkhaired woman: ..What's the problem?.. Man: Everything is jammed, some way...the communications lines are down..and now...the whole system...seems to do things on its own..I can't get in.... Redhaired woman: Something uses an enormous amount of energy...increasing...all functions are out of control...the doors, the engines...weapons systems... Man: Listen to this "singing" noise...?....Now, all the files are playing extremely fast by it self...al kinds of data...power, enigines, systems....everything...Has something taken over the ship or?... The blackhaired woman: ..Shut it down and reboot the whole system!... Man: I can't...nothing reacts, whatever I'm trying to do....! (In the background a lot of raised voices are heard.) The blackhaired woman: ..I'll find the captain... Man: Impossible...he's locked in his quarters, without communication as we are locked in here on the bridge... Redhaired woman(very uncomfortable): ..Something really weird is going on here, look...! (to be continued) Yes, what is going on here? In this "pilot story", starring Miwa and Pippin, I try do plot and character gallery more simple in outlook as well as the scenery (no distracting things etc.) But at the same time I try to do something more with of details like the appearing characters, compositions. Overall trying to do a "more clean story" visually. All poses and almost the entire light are my own. Once again, thank you for your comments - and all kinds of responds are welcome. Have a nice Sunday! :o) JohnnyC / Rhanagaz * "Borrowed from "Star Trek"! ;o) Background: NASA /Hubble "Deep Field".