Fleeting thoughts by dochtersions
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Description
Made with Apophysis.
Mijn gedachten
dwalen
zou ik ze
gaan halen?
weg schuiven
het gordijn
waar zouden ze zijn?
Van achter
het rookgordijn.
Mijn gedachten
geef ik een prijs
neem ze mee
ver op reis
Een snoepreisje
Zowaar een bonbon
bewaar ik
voor als ik
weder kom.
It is difficult to translate, these two short poems.
So f.e. they say in Dutch to a special trip, 'a candy trip'.
In English it would be 'a pleasure trip'.
The surrender of your mind, would be from Dutch: I give my thoughts prise, or prize (which means reveal on English).
From behind the smoke screen, in Dutch means that there is an apparent reality constructed for the truth.
Well, here an effort:
My thoughts wander
would I go
and get them?
sliding the curtain
where would they
be?
From behind
the smoke screen.
My thoughts
I give a prize
take them
travel far
A taster
a candy-trip
Even a chocolate bonbon
I keep
for again
when back I come.
Thank you all very much!

Comments (54)
Beautiful image. I see a lot of flowers and faeries inside a subtile bubble! I like your poem too.
Beautiful, Mies. Mooie kleuren. Corrie
Beautiful thoughts..and a superb image. Wonderful composition and colors.
Een prachtig snoepreisje, Mies. Excellent piece!
Exellente creatie.
That looks like a very big fractal egg. I wonder what would be the result. Very nice work Mies.
Nicely done, excellent composition and love the coloring
Brilliant dsign like pressed flowers in a glass display!
beautiful design and texture, nice work
~Magnificent!~
Wonderful title for a wonderful work!
i can see butterflies here...love it!
What a fabulous image this is. Makes me think about a soap bubble that is about to explode :-) It is so beautiful. :-)
BEAUTIFUL wonderful swirling colours and lines. Yes! just like thoughts!!
Very interesting.
I like this a lot, dear friend! The poem and image are beautiful and your explanations of phrases very helpful. The image has the look of thoughts going where they will, but not totally randomly, for one thought touches on another and finds purpose and meaning in its wandering. I like the two similar shapes of contrasting colors, one dark and one light, the complexity of the patterns, and peaceful shades of the colors. Very beautiful words and image!
AMAZING WORK
Wonderful work.
Wonderful frcatal and poems , dear Mies !
Outstanding Work,
Beautiful fractal abs
A beautiful work of art filled with great color, light, and textures!!!! Wonderful work Mies!!!
This is so beautiful Mies. Lovely colors.
Beautiful colors and textures! This a really pleasing to look at. I love it, Mies!