The Spar by Chipka
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No AI - This artwork was created entirely by hand or with traditional digital tools.
Description
As with many pieces, music serves as something of a persistent inspiration; I hear music as I capture images, and as a result I often attempt to convey the tunes in my mind as I aim my camera in one direction or another. This image is no exception to that general rule, and for a quick listen to its musical soul feel free to click HERE.
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Desolation stirs,
And yet, as Nature’s method
Unseals the royal tomb
So through our ruin
Might inspiration haunt us.
—Hieronymus/Thirteen Invocations
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It is three days to Kartag, by sleigh and by carriage: three days huddled beneath blankets behind a driver—himself blanketed. It is two nights in hostels along the road. All roads lead to Kartag, and though Holoda has taken his first step, he has not yet left the northern shore of Entis, has not yet bade farewell to the faces and the places that have marked his life since his earliest youth.
He had dreamed, many times with his brother, of seeing far away places: farther than Kartag, farther than the southern cities of Hesk and Aóró. He had dreamed of adventures and the shocking charm of new languages spilling from his tongue. He had dreamed—as he still does—of the ruins of Sestria-Sestrián, where slaves revolted on a night of blood and fire, and where—on a night of blood and fire—free-men and free-women scattered in whatever directions the winds took them. Some—many of them—came here and founded the cities of Entis and Hör.
Holoda has never known slavery, has never worn the marks of a whiplashes across his back. Holoda, as pale as an orchid and with hair the color of honeyed silk, has never wore the slave’s bracelet. He has never called a mortal man Master, not even in jest. Slavery is dead in the world now, though perhaps barbarians may still practice the custom. There are no barbarians on the northern continent, none to the continent south. The world differs from that of his ancestors, and where they might have lived in dread and loathing, he lives in the heart of insatiable curiosity. Even now, with one dead brother, and so only half the dreams he recalls, the urge to leave and to see is strong.
“You’re a fool,” mother has said. “Your life is here.”
Father, for his part, holds his silence, understanding—perhaps—needs Holoda cannot articulate. Father, for his part, has also spoken of the young man’s urge to flee the stifling sameness of Entis and to find riches in tombs long forgotten. What good are riches, after all, to the dead? What glories might one find, if—by fate’s wind—he comes into possession of some hero’s crown, buried in the dusts and the mud of Sestria-Sestrián. There may be luck in such crowns, such baubles from worm-corrupted corpses of Lords and their Ladies.
Now, however, there is only snow, only ice, and the restive whisper of the Northern Sea, bestirred by storms far, far, to the east. The time for departure looms close, and Holoda—prepared—waits only for the right moment, the right sleigh-carriage to take him south.
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This is another stretch of Lake Michigan—from the Chicago shore, just south of the shores of Evanston I’d photographed earlier. I’d gone with Corey to photograph ice and clouds, and this is one of the shots I’d managed. Now that Chicago labors through the aftermath of a blizzard, I'm a bit curious to see what it has done to the lake. I don't know if I'll see the result any time soon, but I'm sure that if I do, the music of other worlds will dictate what directions and distances I look into.
As always, thank you for viewing, reading, and commenting, and I hope you’re all having a great week.

Comments (24)
very nice!
Chill image (hehe...a pun too :P)
I love how the land appears to be reaching out towards the sea and sky--wonderful perspective!
Great writing as usual and this is a fantastic, moody shot1 I still haven't thawed out from that day!
Though only the cold and ice bear any relation to it, your little tale puts me in mind of a book by Mark Helprin called "Winter's Tale", a truly wonderful book...anyway, this image is absolutely gorgeous and mesmerizing to me; the ice and cold, the green water, I love it!
As I read this I thought about maybe you and Holoda...having some things in common and Entis as a type of Chicago...listened to the BSG music...I picked up a mood for this excellent/lonely "North Sea" shot. So well done Chip!
I love that gnarled iron finger poking into the icy sea and your short bit of writing, very excellent.
Excellent shot chip, a great perspective and textures, another excellent photo and writing!
Excellent composition! I love the limited color palette of winter. Gray and blue, black and brown and white ... it has its own drama, and the static appearance is a farce. Fabulous image!
Awesome scene, excellent DOF love the subtle colors and the daunting sky, very dramatic composition!
Outstanding writing and another stunning capture my friend.
Gee, that looks cold.
BEAUTIFUL shot/scene and narrative! (I live in Michigan about 120 miles from Chicago. The WINDY CITY was WINDY indeed last week! AND COLD and SNOWY!) We got about a FOOT o' snow here.
wow, such a poetic image.....I would give it the title: What's on the end.... When life has its ups and downs and your mind is full with sorrows go to the sea and reach out to the sky be connected and let your spirit free Sorrows will disappear into the waves your mind will be empty and free make sure that every day counts just do it, let is be Ilona
Superb compo! I like the writings of your alter ego.
SOO beautiful and sooo cold. I think the Main character in this narrative could as well have the name Chip, if I am not very wrong :) I liked the music too even though it was a bit mourning-ish. (Can I say that)?
sublime capture and mood!
do look cold for sure. wonderful done
a most spectacular, moody image!
in the soundtrack the heavy thumps remind of waves crashing agaist the pier... you are certaily very good at conveying your moods though whatever you do, Chip!
wow what a capture it's so lovely and a bit scary and cold in its own way""
Fantastic capture. Like a sharp tip into the sea. Excellent idea.
Beautiful composition. Well presented scene, I like the winter-shots of a waterfront.
Angry sky, frigid looking water and snow on the shoreline. Super shot Chip. Dana