A Story by beachzz
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A Story
Once upon a time there was a woman who wanted to tell a story and she started it and then she couldn't stop she wrote and she wrote and it went on and on and became one big gigantic long run on sentence and it had no beginning and she wondered whether it would ever have an end all she wanted to do was tell the world about this trip she took and how fun it was and where she went and what she did and how she took so many pictures with her friends and they walked and talked and had such a great time then they stopped for coffee and then they walked some more and finally got into the car and had some snacks they bought and they drove some more and went out to dinner and had seafood and drinks and dessert which was mocha chocolate parfait and so very very good but she didn't have any because she was too full she had halibut and there was so much she couldn't eat it all so she brought some home and had it for lunch the next day and then it was time for her to pack and go home so she did and got on two planes but first had to get up very very early in the morning and then she was at the airport and had coffee because she was so tired and the first part of her trip was over and now she had to wait a couple of hours so she could finally get on the plane that would take her home and it was late and she waited more and then it was there and she was on it and it took off and flew her home well almost she still had to drive from the airport to her house and she got there and was so tired she took a very long nap when she woke up she decided to write this story and now it's
The end
Ps she had a very very good time
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Comments (9)
Lol lovely story but I went red in the face reading it without a full stop and a comma to take a breath such fun was obviously had by this lady and her friends..
LOVE the story (and beautiful shot too)! chuckles I'm with Bazza though on being a little light headed from not breathing grins Sounds like a fun time was had by all though!
THANKYOU so much for a great giggle, Marilyn!..I loved it and now I'm off to have a go on my inhaler.
LOL! "What I did on my spring vacation"...
LMAO!!!! I'm with Andrea - I laughed so much I need oxygen!!!
Oh this is incredibly brilliant. I think you've invented a new literary genre too, but I have no idea what it would be called. I laughed; I sat in amazement reading this. What an idea! What an execution. This reminded me of an aspect of the Greek language too. In Greek there is a single word for virtually everything; including things most non-Greeks wouldn't even think there was a word for. Even though this story is actually many words together, the absence of punctuation actually makes it feel like one very long, very complex, hilarious word. WOW! This is the sort of "single word" that describes a particular sort of trip. I love that! This is brilliant, funny, fun, and just flat-out cool!
Breathlessly nonstop, with no capitals, commas, colons, semicolons, apostrophes, periods, hyphens, exclamation points, quotation marks, parentheses, etc. You told me a story and now I can go to bed.
Seems like a very short trip up here.. about as long as the sentence.. :-)) But the weather is stinky so better luck on that next time.
LOL! :D