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Family Flying Practice

Poser Science Fiction posted on Dec 19, 2009
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Thistledown approached his mate. Rose sat on her chair in a blue funk. He asked, "What's wrong?" She looked at him with an unreadable look. "I'm SO ANGRY! Humiliated and embarrassed,too. I shouldn't have been arrested! Protesting the public's treatment of Toxic shouldn't have resulted in arrests! We weren't causing a problem. That makes me angry. Being put in a lock-up and going through the whole finger-printing, body-scan and being deprived of freedom for something so minor is stupid and wasteful. Wasting TWELVE HOURS of my life in bureaucratic paper-pushing was torture!" "THEN being bailed out by a bondsman because I might be a flight risk? I want to PUNCH SOMETHING!" Rose ended up shouting in anger at Thistledown. He flinched. He couldn't help it. Rose fell silent and scanned the shocked reactions of Sunshine and Violet. Sunshine looked like she might cry out of fear. She sighed. "I guess that seems out of character for me. I get angry too. I just needed to vent. Sorry, Sunny. Everyone." Sunny grabbed her mother's leg and said, "Don't feel bad. You're with us here and now. It's alright. I get mad,too. It's alright." Rose knelt and hugged her little girl fiercely and tried not to cry. She couldn't even say why tears came to eye. She felt Violet rub her shoulders and say, "Wow. never thought my mom would get so mad at humans! You haven't become one of the 'Kill all the Humans' party, have you?" Rose took a long time in answering, "No. NO! I just understand the emotions of it a lot better today." Thistledown said, "Well, 'Miss Flight Risk' why don't we fly around Shalmiraine some? Sunny floated on her for almost ten second earlier and Violet flew into a wall an hour ago...we should practice some..." Rose stood up and looked askance at Violet and asked,"INTO A WALL? What were you thinking?" Violet shrugged and said, "DAD! That..this is embarrassing. I was doing a system check on my new equipment... and got playing around...stuff happened." Violet saw the look of fear and anger on Rose's face and felt deep shame. "Yeah. Just like Omega did. I only hurt myself. I'm sorry for reminding you of your greatest pain." "He was a baby. He didn't know what he was doing when he almost killed Lime and broke Sunny's arm. Some flying practice WOULD be a good thing. The Relative-Inertial-Frame generators in us ARE very dangerous. Thistledown--manage Violet, I'll keep my little trouble-maker under control. Violet, sned the snippet of memory to Sunshine, so she'll know what NOT to do, and we'll take off." Violet sighed and gave Sunny a snippet of her memory of what she did, complete with the pain of slamming into a steel way. Rose blinked and Sunny said, "OW! Wow, you really hurt yourself! Your face isn't flat. Did you nose grow back?" Violet made a face and sighed,"YES! It grew back! Let's go!" Thistledown said to Violet, "Quit fiddling with you crystal frequencies! Just set them to perfect harmony and leave it at that! That will give you almost eighty percent efficiency. Once you learn the basics, then fiddle with the non-harmonic frequencies to get greater effect." "Dad! I am NOT a little girl!" He smiled, "You're still growing, even if of adult age! Mind your elders!" Sunny bounced eagerly, "Can we go?" She bounced her head off the ceiling, where Rose grabbed her ankle. "We better go before our children leave us behind!" They flew out of the Abba-Dingo freight locks onto the west facing of the huge mega-structure. They flew for several minutes when Violet said, "HEY! Hey, Dad!? A little help." Sunny pointed and laughed, "Basics! Basics! Fiddling detected!" Thistledown reached down and grabbed Violet's hand. "Yeah---'fiddling detected' indeed! You fied just collapsed. When the efficiency falls below a certain level...down you go! I think Instructor Sunshine said...?" Violet glared at her little sister and stuck out her tongue. --To be Continued!--

Comments (10)


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JOELGLAINE

1:32PM | Sat, 19 December 2009

I know how Rose feels, too. I got arrested Thursday for driving with a revoked licence. I didn't know it was revoked. I was living in my van from Nov of last year to February of this year. They must have sent a notice than. Now my van is impounded and it take $500 to get it out and another $175 to get my licence back. I got $7 in the back. No social security either. Being poor sucks ass. I envy Rose. I can't fly either. Dammit. ^__^V,,

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myrrhluz

2:58PM | Sat, 19 December 2009

Ah man, Joel, that's a bitch. I hope you get it all sorted soon. I wondered when I read Rose's powerful speech if it was coming from anything personal, but I knew how good you are at writing emotion and hoped not. Your troubles haven't cramped your style, this is excellent. I love the composition of the image, with the four of them against Shalmiraine, freight ships flying in a line behind their figures, a ship near by and Violet falling out of the picture. This not only literally follows the narrative, but figuratively too. Love how you've got the bubble with the building coming out of it and light bouncing off in minute rays. Excellent details in the landscape, inside the bubble, exhaust from the nearby ship, and their figures. Wonderful poses and expressions. Poor Violet's expression is perfect. Terrific narrative! I felt similar feelings as Rose when my son was arrested for pot possession. He was in his own home, minding his own business, hurting no one. Of course, he knew pot to be illegal, but why it should be is beyond us. I love the interaction around Violet's mishaps both before the scene and during. Great episode!

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JOELGLAINE

3:10PM | Sat, 19 December 2009

Rose got arrested off-screen a few days before I got arrested in real life. I was wanating drama for the story, NOT ME! LOLOLOL Hmmm...maybe I should write about Rose winning a lottery and wait for money? Yeah right. Hehehehehehe.

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Madbat

12:12AM | Sun, 20 December 2009

Yup, clearly a case of Life imitating art heh heh, yeah being poor sucks ass, I'm all to familiar with having my ass hanging in the breese like that. Isn't the bureaucratic behemoth we've created just wonderful?

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duo

3:05AM | Sun, 20 December 2009

Unusual and interesting

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CrownPrince

7:54AM | Sun, 20 December 2009

LOLOL!! Sometime you just need to get away...

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SIGMAWORLD

10:16AM | Sun, 20 December 2009

Excellent sci fi.

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giovanino

11:32AM | Sun, 20 December 2009

love this one . where you get that suit great stuff.

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ldgilman

10:33PM | Sun, 20 December 2009

Excellent graphics, Great story!!!

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ontar1

5:17PM | Mon, 04 January 2010

Fantastic scene and characters, most excellent story, excellent work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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