Clack-Clack-Thump by Chipka
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No AI - This artwork was created entirely by hand or with traditional digital tools.
Description
There is a lake to the east, where the sun rises and jawless, vampire lampreys seek unwary prey. Their numbers are reduced, but one, another, or another may make its way into local waters and find unspeakable wealth in the local populations of slow, gray carp. From the lake, there is a path to the sea, but it is an artificial, stepped thing: a barrier between waters of different temperament and pedigree. There are beaches west of the lake, and the remnants of swampland. A city stands upon this swamp, enormous concrete stilts sunk deep into the soft and sullen earth.
There was sun today, but clouds, exhaled from the lake, have moved inward. The temperature has dropped. And dropped again.
Here, far from the lake, where a lethargic river rests, a subtle tinge of rust scents the air. There are other smells—the stink of car-farts and the bold and desperate aroma of blossoms not yet wilted. Electricity sparks in the air: not lightening, but the mark of an error, some flaw in the electrified track that powers thunderous, serpentine trains. Always, there is thunder, and the clack-clack-thump, clack-clack-thump of locomotive traffic. Electrical trains travel along raised tracks. Bigger, slower, smoke-spewing engines pull freight cars along the tracks at ground level.
Behind and beneath this, small sounds assert themselves. There is the crunch of gravel to mark the passage of one man and another: compatriots of strange, inscrutable pedigree. They are expatriates-exiles from a world unlike this one. They know trains. They know rivers. But the stink of local aethers, and the clack-cladk-thump of unfamiliar trains, registers only as vague and unsettling. They speak to one another, the flavor of their vocabulary marking them as alien to this place. Their eyes are predatory and careful; they are close—after all—to local residences. Houses of wood-frame and brick that defy a logic the interloper wanderers are accustomed to. They walk calmly. By nightfall, they will rest. They will sleep. And tomorrow, the river (or perhaps a train) will carry them to another city.
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I don't know which came first, picture or vignette. One is evidently a function of the other, but as to origin, there is room for debate. At any rate, this is an image taken today. Corey and I made an excursion to Chicago's Chinatown, and had lunch in the kind of Chinese restaurant with live fish in the window and old Chinese men, speaking in the Cantonese dialect. It was a cheap place, a dive if the truth must be told, but Chinese people ate there. We'd taken hundreds of pictures each, and after eating, we wandered to the Chinatown border, and discovered something in Chicago that we'd never seen before. This image marks the borderland to that region, and the wanderers--not Corey and myself--are an artifact of the train-tracks and the unseen point at which these tracks must end.
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As always, thank you for viewing and reading and commenting, and as always, I hope you've enjoyed this image and it's small, accompanying tale.

Comments (21)
Love the narrative that goes with this. The receeding tracks really draw the view in. Excellent on all counts!
Awesome words and photo!
great story and photo!!!!
Image and narrative go hand in hand, and I can hear the crunch of footsteps upon those rocks, and the crackle of the El above. Excellent work as usual, my friend!
I am one of those people who has an ongoing romance with rail travel. This shot really feels so good.
wandering souls, sounds of the world around them, almost like a scene from a zombie movie--somehow you made me think of this with both your words and the foto. i have no idea why and that makes it even better!!
Wonderful capture.
Wonderful..
Astonishingly, when I read the e-bot something very like your image came instantly to mind! Isn't it amazing how well chosen words do that? and then reading your narrative makes induces that sort of urban despair I feel when caught in such an environment. I could have recurrent thoughts about vampire lampreys...possibly my least favourite creature!
Awesome capture and narrative, working harmoniously together to make one beautiful work!!
This is such a wonderful capture and It is fascinating to read your words.
Excellent photo and great text!!!! Hugs:)
I am with PJ - There is a romance in rail travel that will always surface in my soul when I see an image like this! Your narrative gave me the usual goosebumps! Excellent image and words Chip! WOW!!! :)
love it.
Thought provoking image and story; well done, Chip!
I always enjoy you postings because of the way the narrative and image intertwine so effortlessly. One without the other wouldn't be the same. This, as usual is superb. Great work.
Love the view point and the high contrast. Great work.
Give me a set of railroad tracks and I'm hooked. My father took photos for about 85 of his 99 years and taught me the magic of including a vanishing point in a photo whenever possible. It is always possible with RR tracks:)
There is always a point at which things must end and you have captured it perfectly in photo and story. CC
This could almost be anywhere in the (civilised) world, railroad tracks from somewhere going to somewhere else, ending nowhere for some... Another historical feature, this is the Chicago I don't know, but gradually learning to envisage and embrace. BB
This is a cool shot and very cool narrative too.