Kickboxing by beachzz
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Kickboxing
I hurt
In parts
Of my body
I didn't know
Could feel pain
What was I thinking
Sure my friend
Said you can
Do this it's
Not hard
She lied
I hurt
Like hell
Ache in
Places I
Don't use
And never should
Feel muscles
Stretched beyond
Any ordinary
Capacity
Hurt in spots
Not used
By normal people
My instructor
Sweet young man
He's really a
Sadist torturer
Hideous creature
Who pushes me
So far past
The limits
My body howls
In protest
Screams in pain
Shrieks in agony
But omigod
Does it feel
GOOD
Look out
World
I am woman
Strong
Powerful
And I can
Kick your butt
If only
Mine will stop
Hurting
10/14/09
Comments (12)
This is wonderful! You've written a "punch" into this that mirrors your experience at the gym. Excellent work!
Great writing Marilyn have felt like that myself at times lol in pain I mean lol wonderful work...
Very nice, brings back memories.
When you hear "No Pain No Gain"......Don't believe it! Have fun at it....... Aloha
Hilarious! I LOVE it!
Gee, and here I am still thinking about walking up the steepest, longest hill in town. You've stepped into a new dimension. Wonderfully written,...as a former President used to say, I feel your pain:)
Oh but that is good pain and I bet the instructor is worth it... Hehe... Very humorous my friend and please don't tear anything!!! :)
lol this is too funny, beautiful journey my friend
Most striking prose in re your new found sport, Marilyn! It's one thing to go river rapids boating, dancing, bicycling, skiing, and all the other activities you've participated in, but kickboxing? Ooops and ouch!
Ow, I can feel your pain.
Love your thoughts and words. very nice writing. Dana
WEll, I am sore too so I sure can relate wonderful work warm hugs, Linda