Dancin Divas by beachzz
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Dancin Divas
There they were
Those two
Crazy
Silly
Slightly high
Women
The music was hot
And so were
The guys
The place
Was hoppin
But no one danced
More music
A few more
Drinks
And things
Started getting
Wild
The girls left
And the women
Ruled the place
They rocked
They rolled
Shook the rafters
Two women
Not young
But filled
With a life
And a spirit
That was catching
Those hot young guys
Couldn't get
Enough of
Those wild women
It was a siren song
Drove them crazy
Dance with me
Dance with me
No
Dance with ME
And they did
They danced
They danced till
They couldn't stop
It became dance
Madness
Those hot young men
Were entranced
The wild women
Laughed
Twirled
Swirled
Spun
They ruled
The lights
Came up
And still those
Hot young men
Surrounded them
Wouldn't let them go
Followed them
Take me home
Take me home
No, take ME home
The wild women
Laughed
Sang
Danced
Kissed
Hugged
Those young
Men watched
The women leave
Gave them cards
Numbers
Call me
Call me
No, call ME
Those dancing divas
Those wild women
Broke hearts
Caused strong men
To weep
But they were
Kind
Gentle
Loving
Those hot young guys
Never knew what hit them
They talk still
Of those
Wild women
And they remember
They hope
Wonder
Dare they
Dream???
Comments (8)
grin I wish I could be there... Wonderful work putting it to words Marilyn!! Bravo! :)
Marvellous!!!!
This is great! Really excellent work -- it has such power!
Very nice work!
Excellent maz!!!
My friend I just love it when you write, this is beautiful work!!!!! Now I am no longer a young hot man, well not young anymore hahaha but I know I would be one of them hawling like a wild dog at these beautiful women. Wonderful work my friend, wonderful
a wonderful evocation, your language is as always in potent pulses & breaths, and you describe the event as an event—a sequence of invitations, dance, etc—but also as the feelings & even dares of these people & their oh-so different worlds coming together. And your image seems to be someone dancing and partially obscured not only by shadow & light but by passion. (You always choose images for your writing, well. It's something only a few writers do well, and you're definitely one.) I've always liked how you end some stanzas with single words (laughed, sang, danced, kissed, hugged), and know how to wind down a stanza with little beats, little pulses of big experiences & feelings. A fine work Marilyn. And I know what the poem means! To the divas, I say: More to you!
lovely words and image x