My Truth by beachzz
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My Truth
Years and years
Of words not said
Oceans of tears
Filled my head
I opened my soul
Poured out my heart
Filled that hole
Did my part
The truth was told
It set me free
I didn't fold
I was just me
I knew I was right
I had to try
Wings in flight
Soaring high
The new day brings
Light and peace
My heart sings
Will never cease
A shift in the wind
A change in the soul
A life not dim
It's made me whole.
4/17/09
Comments (15)
what a fine truth to be!
Ah, your illustration of the bird soaring fits your words perfectly. Your six verses say all that needs to be said to give me, your reader, just a sense of a journey that you, the writer, has taken past to present. As you usually do, you end on a high note. This is a poem with a healthy, optimistic outlook. You've lifted me up. Well done:)
Beautiful poem and image
Bill said it all.
Yes, bill really did say it all. This is triumphal in a very inward way. It's beautiful. And I'm so happy you're feeling all that. Your journey deserves the beauty & flight of this piece; and, with bill, I love the picture too, it's perfect for your words. And as always, you say it all in the shortest means, and here your stanzas are short and so to the point, it's like little gifts in each one. (And you rhymed! And it takes us along with real ease, it wholly works.) Beautiful, Marilyn, and I hope the spirit of it is with you always. A personal triumph of a poem.
Wonderful work on this one Marilyn, very inspirational
superlative!
This is beautiful writing my friend, very nice :)
magic and beautiful scene...excellent art..!!!
wonderful work have a warm weekend, Linda
lovely written and beautifull image too x 5+
Again, Bill said it all.
This is just awesome, Marilyn. Excellent work! You've put such a long story into so few lines. Beautifully done!
This is a great, uplifting piece of writing: quietly affirmative and wonderfully succint. I love the mood you've instilled here, as well as the image you've chosen to accompany it. Fantastic work, as always.
Bravo!!! :::stands and aplauds:::