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Crystal & Victor of Bomaw
Divorced!
First I must say heading in, that I love my new computer. I have yet to put it to the limit. I wanted so badly to add two more persons to this scene because there were indeed two more as it played out in this weeks episode. This was a big one for the readers, and I should have pushed my limits but I didn't want to loose all I'd done even though I saved this time, every step of the way. But yeah, I could have done two more people and now I regret being such a coward - oh well, on with the story...
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"Crystal?! Wha-what are you saying? I never signed any divorced papers! I'm telling you, I never saw them! We were just separated, remember? I hadn't made any decision on anything yet!"
"Excuse me? What do you call cheating on me then Victor? Sounds like a decision has been made to me! Even after that, I still held out hope that you would see what was happening to us. I drew up the papers, sent them to you, to scare you. I thought, for sure, he'll see these and come to his senses. But no, you signed them, you took them in, and then moved in with Jeanine!"
"I NEVER SAW THEM CRYSTAL! I swear to God! Oh my god! What is going on here! I would know if I signed divorce papers, but I never did! I swear to you!"
"I can't believe you're playing this game now. I'm not going to continue on this way with you. I've cried enough tears! I know I wasn't perfect, but I never dis'd you - I never cheated on you! I tried to love you - but I was on my own! I only called you to work out visits with your boys, that's it."
"Have you heard, a thing I've said?! I didn't divorce you!" Victor swore again, on the verge of pulling his hair out. He was spinning in disbelief, sure that everyone was crazy. He turned to Mundo, standing on the porch, Crystal's younger brother, "Mundo, What the hell is going on man? I swear to you, I didn't do it!?
Mundo backed up, shaking his head, "I'm staying out of it man, that's between you and my sister." He turned and went into the house, leaving Crystal outside with their Papah-Shawn, who was loosing patience. "I think enough has been said..." Shawn had stood patiently by, now - he just wanted him gone. "Victor, it's time for you to leave, you've caused enough grief to my daughter."
"No! I'm not going anywhere until this is settled!" He refused to leave and turning back to Crystal, "Crystal please, leave with me now, let's go somewhere and talk about this?"
"Crystal is home - to stay!" Shawn straighted up and walked towards them.
"Come on man, this is not right, she's my wife!"
"I am not your wife Victor, not anymore. How you can stand here and deny all, is beyond me. Your mother told me! She said, you wanted it done with, you signed them, took them in. It's over. You've broken my heart enough and I'm not going back that way again."
"My - mother? How does she know, if I don't know?"
"You'll have to ask her that, because she took the papers from me - and said she would make sure you got them." Crystal turned away heading for the porch steps. Victor stood spinning, his mother on his mind - in a rage, he turned, lept into his car and sped off.
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Credits
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Daz Studio 2.3.3.146
Seashore Home @ Daz
Plants all Lisa Botanicals @ Daz
M4 complete X 2 @ Daz
David
V4 complete
Characters: Paul for V4 - used on M4 w/TC2
DTG Will for David
Various props for scene
AprilYSH Blaine Hair @ Daz3d
Nabia Hair by plus3d, 3Dream, Mariny
Story by yours truly, MKeyes
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Copryright©bomaw.com, 2009
All Rights Reserved
Original drama series by MKeyes
Comments (30)
Excellent work
WOW! Such a great work, lots of time have you used too to make it so perfect. :)
Victor's nightmare - and the facial and body expressions on the acting characters are excellent!
CAPTURED in Perfection, dear Sis! Even better than I imagined reading the scene. Truly wonderful writing and illustrations. I know not a soul that does it better. Love it! Bravo!!!!
Good to see you're enjoying the new machine. Great image, I especially like the posing and the lighting turned out really nice too. Nice!
Excellent work!!
Wonderful. I love the story and the image is fantastic. Great lighting.
Everything about this scene is truly captivating, I can't begin to imagine the time spent in the lovely image alone with all the characters and the emotion on display. Great work on the story to top it off so that is holds your attention
Eceelnt work and great story,Well done!
You did a fantastic image with that new PC! You go girl! The lighting and expressions are great!! Go head and see what 2 more characters do!!!!
I always love reading your stories M!!! They're great!!! And the images are just the icing on the cake!
great render, i read the story and now i agree you forgot to put the mother in ;)
Very nice indeed! The scene is excellent. The lighting can out extremely well. Yes, you should be most pleased with this one.
ohh great render love it very nice Jugs Heidi
Expressions réalistes, excellent travail!
great render :-)
Wonderful scene - you can see the tension between the characters - posing and expressions are first class - props are just perfect - storyline great work - excellently done
Wonderfully rendered scene to support your story. Emotions captured beautifully!
nice work there is ways to render lots of peeps but I am sure u know most of them ;-)
This is so well set up and the posing is great. Sure does tell the story in image format and conveys exactly what is written. Great work!!
A wonderfully rich image, full of great little details. Great posing too, especially of Victor and Crystal
Great Story;) Very nice work, dont beat yourself up on this it looks Great plus there is always another render Lol Keep up the good work:) CHEERs..
Awesomely composed scene , love the details and characters :) great story as well!
Wow I havent read this scene yet but you did an excellent job on the pic, I thought it was Ben instead of Shawn on here though. Great work my dear!
Nice story and image...
Very good pose and render.
Excellent scene! Packed with detail, very natural poses and super-duper lighting!!
Oh this is a stunner...WOW
!-:¦:-~*•:¨¨:•°-:¦:-°•:¨¨:• ~An Remarkable Image~ •:¨¨:•°-:¦:-°•:¨¨:•~-:¦:-!
Ca a l'air tellement vrai.