Do You? by beachzz
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Do You?
I never know
If you think of me
As often
As I think of you
Probably not
For sometimes
It seems
I think of nothing else
Sometimes a moment
Or two will pass
That there isn’t
A thought of you
And then
There you are
Back in my mind
Not leaving me alone
I think of a line
“Out, damned spot”
From another
Far better writer
I only wish
It were that easy
To get my
Mind back
For it seems
I’ve lost it
12/30/08
Comments (15)
I hate it when that happens. Well written!
touching!lovely written!
Oh don't lose it, it can be hard to find ;^D
Very thought provoking words Maz.
Oh Yes I Know where you are coming from with these words, doesn't that just drive you crazy!
a modern day love poem, friend or lover, and true feelings about trying to get our minds back after thinking of someone we'd like closer to us...and your Macbeth quote ("Out, damned spot") is perfect for your visual, an orb almost pestered by that big blue 'spot' (a lover? a person? our own nagging need for a person?) Losing one's mind in the thoughts of someone else: Another bard quote: "When to the sessions of sweet silent thought/I summon up remembrance of things past..." Sweet & frustrated remembrance. Your art & words work perfectly for your thought. You have a real way with the short concise line; very nice work, Marilyn...
I have some of those "bitter sweet rememberances" too. And when I have them so many emotions flood through me, even being angry at this person for making me feel the way I do. But I can also smile at the happier memories because for a time, they did bring love and laughter in to my life. Well written Marliyn, you do have a way with words and bringing your emotions to the surface where we can all share in your feelings!
me too wonderful words thanks for the thought now I forgot what I was going to say thanks for the sunshine it sure is welcome warm hug, Linda
super words
lost your mind lol I just can see it on tv as some one picks up a part of the flest off his front yard and say" guess they lost this on they walks" you know; the ads they show on TV on loseing wieght. anyway this is wonderful poem
...take this man/woman to be your lawfully wedded man/wife? Love your narrative and accompanying supernovae image, M!
... Assert Confirm Leading to: Affirmation Very Positive with just a bit of internal self-doubt Heart with Mind You are quite alright and okay by me b.
This is beautiful. I love it, I have those same feelings sometimes, very well written
Been there, survived (but never did get my mind back!)
not to feel bad girl...I lost mine longggg time ago