oblivion page 192 by midnight_stories
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Description
One of my pet hates with comics is having to cover up my graphics with textboxes and balloons. So I'm trying something a bit different. Trying to find dark areas of the page to overlay the text on. I've found now that I'm doing a more graphic novel style I tend to do a full splash screen for the background and overlay the panels on top with the focus of the main screen to substitute for one of the panels. So I'm still learning and trying new stuff. Thanks to the people who came back I guess the nudity really did boost numbers. Oh well back to old cyber board. Thanks for looking
Comments (8)
The text looks great....and yes it works better with those fantastic graphics......Excellent work !!!
I also believe this is one of your best pages yet. Everything is clear, the text is easy to read. Even David's facial expression is clear and readable. Bravo !!!!! This is going into my Fav's.
Agreed with the text boxes and voice balloons. They need to be pre-considered in the image constuction. But they do help uncomplicating the picture upon first glance. The first glance is the catch whether somebody will actually read the work. Your keeping the amount of words low is a good strategy. Nice three panel image splash.
Very nice page! The first panel has a very classic Kirby look and feel to me.
Very well done. I do like the text without balloons. The expression on David's face is great.
Very strong panel up at the top, love that pose and camera angle. I think the text with no balloons works just fine here, and it is frustrating when you have to cover up art!
"2001" ain't got nothin' on this story!!! Nor has "Tron"! Your imagery is in a class of its own. Probably won't ever become a movie (too little T&A, too much thinking required), but it is right up there with the best movies in sheer impact. Take a bow!
I'm interested (which is the goal)!