Born Free by danob
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No AI - This artwork was created entirely by hand or with traditional digital tools.
Description
An image done to celebrate the return of the Red Kite to Wiltshire, this was a commision work so wanted your feedback as I hardly ever postwork my images, I used another sky and one of my kites in flight

Comments (48)
Fantastic shot for a good celebration ! I love this shot, and to see this incredible bird. That's a wild and superb composition Danny, and this sky with these colors are perfect for this splendid guy ! So lovely work my friend. Hugs, and have a good week.
you have done a remarkable work !!! BEAUTIFUL!!! your postwork is brilliant and senstational!!... Wonderfully done and that capture is too beautiful!! WOW!! V!
marvellous ! yeah !! free !!!! that converges with my last post, maybe q:)
wowww, excellent work and good celebration!!! good day and kiss
no words to describe the beauty..congrats..S
That is such a gorgeous image!! Excellent work!
Great work.
It's a splendid work Danny! My only caveat? The lighting on the bird appears to be essentially directly overhead, while the sun is obviously setting behind and below the level of the bird, creating the illusion that the kite was being lit from 2 distinct light sources. It's a fantastic image nonetheless! Have a marvelous day, in spite of my constructive criticism my friend! Your work is beautiful!
I like the composition and concept here !
Fascinante ! Outstanding image !
love the colours of the sky.. and gorgeous composition dan... outstanding:)
really looks like unreal...
beautifull collage ! LOVe a lot!
WOOOOOOOOW Daniel!! This is a real outsanding postwork tho.. And that wild bird is a real wild looking at me tho.. As per the main concept and composition as i mentioned before it is almost a masterpiece and at the same time i agree with: tmathise. I can also see and or tell when i looked at it first time, it is a nice attempt of manipulation! I can see that your lovely bird (MAIN OBJECT) is extracted from a lighter background, i see that on the little tiney white line around it (The Edges).. The extraction it self is perfectly done tho.. But when you come to this point, you need to use the: FEATHER option from the SELECT menu in your Photoshop Program is you use one,and set it to: 0.2 - 0.5 depends on your needs. That will help to blend the edges abit.. You will still be able to see some lines. So if you are extracting from a dark background the edges will be black. And when you extract from a ligher backgroung the edges will be ligher to white.. In that case we can use the: Matting option under the LAYER MENU, Remove black matte for the dark edges and or remove white for the lighter ones. it help a lot tho.. And you might need to blend it a bit as well.. Now regarding the sun light comming from behind on the left.. Leaving the top of the lovely bird reflecting the light is ok tho.. But its face can't be left like that.. Then you can add some burn tool to it or darken it a little bit or even you can add manual shadow.. Other then that!! It is still so pro and thank you so much for this post.. It is amazing and your STOCK rock!! Here is a big vote for the best Daniel and wish you a lovely day my friend.
Sublime work Danny, I am glad he is back with you, in Wiltshire. I am loving that sky too :-) hugs. Excellent, without a single doubt!!!
That is a pretty cool look, I agree with everything written so far and would add that there is still some lighter sky in between two feathers that stands out to me. Otherwise beautiful work!
Awsome capture and post work.
Stunning!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's a fantastic image as a whole... I just feel you need to blur out or blend out some of the edges with a 3point soft brush; then, you could create a new layer, blur the image (quite strongly) and use the Color mode dropdown, so that only the color of the sky bleeds through on the bird. Excellent work Danny!!
Thanks I have carried out some of the suggestions and can redo any as we go along all very helpful and thanks very much
Hmm i think the sky takes away from the bird. Where as i feel its the bird that should be the main focus. IMO. But would love to see the original version. Also the edges of the bird could be made softer. But is still awesome as always:)
I am amazed!
VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOL, I have never seen so much constructive criticism on one piece. Must be that you really hit on something! I think the crit. is essentially right, however, there is a magical quality to the image that seems to bring it above this crit. To me it could be that the bird appeared by magic, or that the bird radiates a beauty of it's own, represented by the seemingly out of place lighting. The point is, beauty, imagination, faith; all of these are part of the magic of art! Beautiful image Dan, and have a great night +++
that is a kite? never seen one like that. excellent isolation and sky
I think you have done a wonderful job, might darken the areas at the tail, great job:):)..V
This is lovely,Danny.It has a very painterly/poster-type commercial look to it...and as such,it works quite well for me.Your composition is wonderful and inspiring to look at.Best of luck to you with this and mega-congrats on getting this commission.I can't think of anyone better suited for it.All of your work is wonderful.-M :^)
Wow that is a wonderful shot. I find it so hard to get a bird to stand still when it is flying!!! I'm sure whoever the commission is for will be delighted with this picture. Thats a great sky background.
I had to look at this more than once Dan, it really is eye catching...your PW on this one really makes it a remarkable image and who ever commisioned you for this should be thoroughly pleased...Congrats on your commision you are certainly deserving of it! Aloha!
Like the kite, it soars wild-eyed and easy, cunningly matched with sunrise sky....one of your best!