slice of life; to get clean by jocko500
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When I look in do I see what is in me?
If it is; how do I get it out of me?
What to do? What to do?
A slice of life I see in me.
What to do?
I was born this way; now is the time to clean it up
I can not do it on my own. I know I tried.
Only to be born again was the only way.
Only way to clean the trash out of my life.
I am clean now but I see the old self still wish to rise up.
Got to fight the flesh; and if I mess up; ask for forgiveness.
Then I be clean; only one way.
The devil comes to try us and many time I fall.
I am dirty again. What to do?
Only look to the Cross and ask forgiven and the Blood will wash me white as snow.
The End
thanks for looking ; comments and ;votes
Comments (30)
Through a broken glass... just another great idea, and well executed Jock. You are on such a creative roll.
A excellent and creative idea Jock....!!!
A wonderful expression of humility Jock! Your photo is a profound spiritual lesson of the way to inner peace! Excellent work! :)
excellent compo... :) deep philosophical words.. awww ..:)..)))
Very well said and composed. Excellent Aloha
Cool poem and photo Jock! I think all of us have a bit of a dark side, and the devil's always coming to whisper in our ear, but that's the perfect time for a prayer. I find that works every time. Nice work! V (:
Your words remind me of a quote by the late humanistic psychologist Fritz Perls: "To suffer one's death and to be reborn is not easy". Your art is becoming very theraputic. The slice of the empty room/garage above your neck is a great symbol for clearing the mind, starting from scratch. Excellent composition, Jock.
This is fantastic. I had to really look at it to figure out what I was looking at!!! Thanks for sharing!! Excellent.
Very excellent jocko! Inspiring and good advice for all of us. :-) Very creative.
mmm eccellent the way you put this into our minds Jocko, a lot of thoughts, and we all have them, struggle on dear, it will all be fine, eccellent image, goes to the heart. V* Lina
wonderfully creativive you are with your work!! love the poetry too!! VOTE
It took me a while to figure out what I was looking at but now it is quite obvious. Great representation of the emptiness and isolation we all find reflected in our souls. Really nice writing as well, excellent presentation all around!
nedd to call a special kind of man window-soul cleener
Intreging photo. You have a great way of finding unique shots.
Abstract thinking and great abstract art :D Well captured !!~*****~!!
Excellent and interesting work!
A very interesting and creative work! Excellent Jocko! :)
oh, JOck...what next? your imagination is awesome! **V
Brilliantly written! The picture is outstanding :) Cathy xoxoxo
Many want to build churches like Paul did without first persecuting the faithful and being a good Roman citizen. They even avoid areas with lightning seeking a phrase or driving instead of riding a horse. What mirror do they then show for their efforts when faith comes? Who is in their reverse? Thus they try to look inside to the paraclete as if pregnant. There is no second chance if the first chance is spurned.
i really like your poem, Jocko, and your image is suited perfect for it! :)
Well said and wonderfully composed!
picture and words fits!!excellent!!!
unique!!!
A fine Image Jocko! salute
First glance reveals an abstract composition, but with a moments study you realize that this is a candid shot...well captured...excellent eye.
Your thoughts well said and also well depicted ! Wonderful wok !
Interesting pic and statement, I guess the best we can do is try to better ourselves whatever we've done and what we believe... great quote from PumaSue as well.
tough to come clean; after all, we're all liable to sin, so it's very hard to come clean...
Excellent work,the image speaks as does your words!!Wonderful work!!*V